| "Zero-G" Reviews/Comments [ 341 ] |
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Title: GREAT CHAPPIE!
Reviewed By: 12blue12 logged off On: February 12, 2005 18:29 EST
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wow she finally peiced it all together! and oh yeah um yor a/n was weird lol. oh plz update soon cuz i sooo want to know what kag will do she was standing at the doorway for christ sake eek and what will she do about the fact that well inuyasha was sent to kill her? oh and how is inuyasha gonna act all these questions that r poppin into my head geeze i hate cliffies damn i hate them! well ciao amiga UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: kamalakali [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It's my kind of read! Just...ahh, screw it! I'm not even going to attempt to rhyme. Anyway, lovely new chapter! I simply love the cliff hanger you gave us, you tease, you. Lol. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: queenserena(mad at you..) On: February 12, 2005 13:33 EST
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*eyes widen*Hm...Kagome-chan?/Rin:Why doesn't she go save Sango-san instead!?/*sigh*Poor, San-san...And quick question, I'm being lazy, what does paedolie(still being lazy) mean? I t must be English, it wasn't in the dictionary...
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Reviewed By: wackywisher18 (not logged in) On: February 11, 2005 19:49 EST
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Looks like Inu's been found out! I can't wait for the next chapter!! SO please, keep up the incredible work, and please, please, please, update as soon as possible!!!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 18:11 EST
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"But then again, he was running a little short on cash recently." ~~~ had been running ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So Sango's been nabbed again? Crud. When they torture her this time, they'll probably ask who let her go. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So businessmen are still allowed to wear colored ties? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ But I did real the top A/N! ~~~ Was Kagome in the doorway to the bar or to his apartment? If the former, how did she know where to go? Was it in the address book?
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Title: The deadly Cliffhanger
Reviewed By: Smaug09 On: February 11, 2005 17:45 EST
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Okay, that really pissed me off. Plz update soon, like tomorrow. The world is such a boring place and reading ain't. You rock! And this is the first time I actually bothered writing a review for a cliffhanger, so pretty plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not in) On: February 11, 2005 12:52 EST
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Oops! Well, he's in for it now, isn't he? Hopefully she wont screw it up for him though. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Got Caught! On: February 11, 2005 11:47 EST
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Oh my gee! I lovees it >:]. All around it's awesome. Can't wait to read the next chatper.
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Title: Busted!!!
Reviewed By: ssp51201 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 03:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man...Inu's realllly in for it now, huh? I won't say anymore....I can't wait to read the next chappy! Once again, you got me exctied about your updates, girl!
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Reviewed By: kagz On: February 10, 2005 21:14 EST
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uh oh. sounds like trouble XD...but how i so love trouble.....
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:55 EST
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Great chapter and what could Kagome be doing there at that time of the night. Okay, so where did the purple monkeys take your brain. Oh wait, your pennyless without a brain, you won't remember. Hope they come back. Had to add that. See someone reads those A/N, sometimes. Update soon, later.
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Title: ch.12
Reviewed By: kagomestanton *not logged in* On: February 10, 2005 20:36 EST
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whoooooooooo that was really good!!!!!!!!! love the story... update soon! hahah my code is heks!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:54 EST
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Awesome plot twist! update lots more!
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Title: Awsom!
Reviewed By: kafeen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a realy good story! Please keep writing it!
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Reviewed By: BlueDayDreamer678 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 19:56 EST
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You stinker, what a cliffhanger!! I can not wait until the next chapter, I'm excited to see Soutas reaction!! Keep up the incredible work, and please, please, please, update as soon as possible!!!
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