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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:34 CST
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I don't know what I can say. For a subject I have to be honest and call it twisted. What those vermin did to Naruto is absolutely horrible. Unfortunately if Naruto was of the real world and that kind of power and demon inside him, I think it would happen. For format it needs work, the grammer too, I saw a lot of mistakes. For the content of the story, I say its good. The story is unusual I have read stories of where Naruto is Itachi's hooker. And even that as bad as it was (in how Naruto was treated) does not compare to this. Frankly and I don't want to seem rude, but this belongs in the NC-17 category. It covers too many details of what is happening. May even give some nightmares. For what its worth, I like this story, its unusual and it is a story that people can get hooked to. For Naruto's sake please have at the end something that can resemble a happy ending. I don't think many fans will like it going through all this angst and then to not have somekind of happy ending. But like I said I like the story. Continue. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
.......O_O My god....This is just....woah...If that snakey-guy does anything to Naru-chan right now~! Grr...>_
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Reviewed By: Ghonchi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 05:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This story is just so...wow! You are really good at the details, and I hope you are going to complete it....!
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