| "Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: Darkdemon53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Don't you dare stop! i'm almost in tears! I need to know what is going to happen! Please Please Please Update fast!!!!!!
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Title: ::triesnottodie::
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 23:27 CST
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GRAGH! You make me so miserable! Then again, YOU MAKE ME SO HAPPY! This is so wonderfully written, but so sad! I WANNA CRY FOR POOR NARUTO! You really make the story come to life! PLEASE KEEP GOING!!
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Title: Hm
Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 00:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories... this and the other Naruto one (sorry forgot the name). They are very.. interesting, heh. Hopefully you'll update someday, I can't wait to see what happens next
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Title: HEE!!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 17:44 CST
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WHOOT! You live! ::clings to j00:: THANKIES FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER! Very well written, and I love how you make all the characters IN character, but at the same time....being luffed, or all hurt inside! YOU ROCK! ::leechs onto j00::
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Title: OH NOEZ!!
Reviewed By: Silver Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well HELL! This story is EXCELLENT! ... ::notices that it's not finished:: DANGIT! Please keep going with this! IT'S WONDERFUL AND I EVEN GOT UP FROM BED ((I'm sick like a doggy with food posioning)) JUST TO READ THIS!!! WHY!?!! ...Please keep going? I'll ...give you a cookie? ..and marry you! TEE!!
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 18:31 CST
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Oh great, amazing, all-powerful writer of 'Broken', I throw myself at your feet to beg you to update your amazing and wonderful fic. For if I do not read more I will surely die. So, please continue to write. That is all that this humble little peasant requests of you.
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Title: Broken
Reviewed By: Darkdemon53 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue to write this story it is a great story!
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Reviewed By: fireprincess59 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm lovin' the story so far. You really should update really soon. If your beta ever quits, just e-mail me. I'd be happy to beta for you.
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Title: Plz write more
Reviewed By: InsaneDragonSlayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story plz keep writing more. I gave you a 10 out of 10.
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Reviewed By: Adan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 17:09 CST
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Wow. I really like how this chapter has turned out! You got a really really good Beta! Still lovin this story! Maybe some new chappies soon? ;D ~Adan
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Reviewed By: Adan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 18:23 CDT
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@_@ Holy shit! XD Just so you know, it's like, one big block of text right now. You might want to fix that. ^^ I'm fine with you editing stuff, but don't forget to update!!! ^_^ *cuddles* This story's awesome! I love you!
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Reviewed By: Velvet Diamond On: September 15, 2005 08:25 CDT
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I just finished reading 1-4 and tears started to fall down my face. I really do like your story. I'm going to go finish reading the other chapters. Ja ne.
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Title: Insert Title Here
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: September 14, 2005 18:13 CDT
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I shouldn't be spamming up your review board or anything, but when are you are you gonna update Paradise? Also, That review took forever to write! But when I read it, I was done in like five seconds! Wahh!!!
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Title: Yes! A Review From Me! ^0^
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: September 14, 2005 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished reading the new chapters. Took forever too. Why? I really don't know. I just got interupted every time I sat down to read. =( I even debated printing this out so I could just read in the restroom or something (where no one can disrupt me) but decided that would be somewhat overboard. Oh well, I'm here now. .......... So, I like the plot development and everything! (If I was glad to see Naruto and Sasuke getting back to Konoha, I was delighted at the notion of killing infidels.) Really, it's as if the enamored couple are off to a lovely honeymoon in their hometown, stopping only to bring joy and happiness to those around them. (By killing infidels.) I mean, there's sex, passion, and ninja fighting powers! Oh, it's just so exciting! .......... OK, sorry about that. I'm just getting so joyful, you know? Oh. Fine. A few questions then. .......... What was the dirty, four-letter word? Is Choi from Choi-sama? What were all those infidels for? What exactly is up with Konohagakure again? (I vaugely remember something about boards and no ninja and important Akatsuki matters.)
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Reviewed By: theonetheonly On: September 08, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your style of writing the i feel bad for naruto though but i love your fic. keep writing
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