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Reviewed By: purplegoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story from since it was still on fanart (that crappy site, I was GoddessOFAllThingsPurple) I've read it at least 3 times, I just haven't been able to comment, my computer's retarded. but anyway, you've earned a place in my mind as a celebrity
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Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 23:07 CST
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this fanfic is soo great! I wish you would update more often! It's my favorite
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Reviewed By: Adan11 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 15:15 CDT
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I demand a sequel.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 16:49 CDT
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NOOOO Why did it have to end? I still can't believe it, but oh well. Your story was really captivating and interesting. Good Job on it!
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Reviewed By: XFactor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, it's ended *tear*. After all that angst and what not, they all make it out okay. Not too shabby. I could show some examples of incorrect grammar, but who cares? It was readable! It was interesting.. so yeah. What I'm trying to say is, good job. :P
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Title: been following this story since forever
Reviewed By: Shippo_18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been reading this story since it was first put on fanart central which you left off at two chapters (that left me sad for a long time) but then i was surfing a newly found site from my friend then all of a sudden i see a stroy called broken and i was like thiscan't be the same story and it was anyway i think you brought out a completely new side to kyubi showing that he does have envy towards humanity and i just thought that it was so kaiwaii and you even made kyubi suffer with naruto and i think that it made kyubi show sympathy i just loved it hope you do a sequel staring kyubi -Devious
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Title: been following this story since forever
Reviewed By: Shippo_18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been reading this story since it was first put on fanart central which you left off at two chapters (that left me sad for a long time) but then i was surfing a newly found site from my friend then all of a sudden i see a stroy called broken and i was like thiscan't be the same story and it was anyway i think you brought out a completely new side to kyubi showing that he does have envy towards humanity and i just thought that it was so kaiwaii and you even made kyubi suffer with naruto and i think that it made kyubi show sympathy i just loved it hope you do a sequel staring kyubi -Devious
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Title: AWWSOME!
Reviewed By: windchild [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 06:47 CDT
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This is the first time for me reviewing you, but I've been reading your stories for long, you're an awsome author to begin with! ^^ Please update soon, that's all I have to say, the story is brilliant among many I've read so far. Hope there's a happy ending to this story ^^ Oh and I have a tiny winy gift for you since I love your stories so much, specially this one, hope you like it--- http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y18/windchild/Broken.jpg ~Wind ^^
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Reviewed By: emily_strange [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Don't say me that sasuke will accsept that request of kyuubis! NOOO!! I have been reading this from the start, and I think this is so GOOD so damn GOOD! but now there is a chance that sasuke will get pregnant... no...I don't want that TT_TT ... why can't it be so that sasuke will have to mate with naruto and naruto get pregnant and give birth for the new body of kyuubi... If it got that way, I would be so so sos so so happy that I think that I'd jumb from the window (not literally)but still... I love this story all about it for this far, but if that ever happens that sasuke got pregnant, Ithink i'd die... (literally) but antway... love your story
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Title: Saw It Coming...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very good chapter, this! I really liked the ending, although, I was sad that I had to read the whole last half of the last chapter again...T.T Still, there was the change in pregnant teens (it was going to be Naruto before hand, right?) It's gonna be really strange to have a hormonal Sasuke, but I'm looking forward to it! Much love.
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Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, I concur, a single chapter won't be enough to finish this- and if you try we'll probably be reading for a fortnight. ^^ Not that *I'm* complaining. ^____^ I like how your bringing things to a closer wrap and pulling all the bunnies into one bundle. ^^ Poor Kyuubi-chan! I feel so sorry for him that he doesn't have anyone there for him. *snuggles the Kyu-yokai* As always, since discovering this brilliant story, I send my love and congratulations on one of the best Naruto stories I've ever read. ^_^
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Title: I Think I Know...
Reviewed By: PeachLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pwuhaa... I think I know where this is going! I won't spoil it for all your adoring fans, though. As for Kyuu-chan's emotional development and first time experiencing heartbreak, I think it's endearing! Now, I can finally tell them how Kyuubi is my big scary bishy and have an excuse why that's not creepy. Hope you're doing well with the army or whatever it is I heard you're in. Good luck and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more damit!!!!
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Title: MOREMOREMORE
Reviewed By: sinistergypsy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're not just awesome. You are brilliant!! I AM DESPERATE for the next chapter and am currently highlighting your fic in our fanclub. TOOOOO awesome!! WELL DONE!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
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Title: Might not finish
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I might not finish the fic, cause Im not in the mood for naruto, but I promise to come back to it and review :)
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