| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 16, 2005 16:42 EST
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Awww, cute and fun. Although I can see that InuYasha really needs to have time and privacy to have a good long talk with Kagome. She may know that he has waited 500 years, but until they talk about it, she won't really KNOW what he went thru. -- Great.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 16:23 EST
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another great chapter! i was just thinking, maybe you could get kagome jealous over all the things her friends saw since she left them?
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Title: awww...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 16, 2005 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww... how sweet keep uip the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: March 16, 2005 00:36 EST
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yay, update! very good, i'm glad they finally got together, please update soon!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 15, 2005 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best chapter yet! I'm still LMAO!!! Inu passing out and not letting go of Kagome, what a hoot...But them waking up together was sooo sweet. I can now see Inu and Kags dancing it up on Mankees' island paradise.... Hope all goes well with her family and I'm tring to figure out how the family is going to take the dowrey....What could possibly be in those chest he's packed in the car? Hhhmmmm......Oh well I'll see in the next chapter, see ya soon and thanks for sharing you are doing an AWESOME job!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: March 15, 2005 22:15 EST
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Sesshoumaru scoffed...SESSHOUMARU SCOFFED!!!!!! LMAO ROTF!!!!! that was priceless. now, mind you i'm sick and my throat is killing me but i roared when i saw that, earning me a few misplaced frowns from family. LOL. great chapter, i don't think i could be happier with how it turned out. somehow, though, i have a forboding feeling that InuYasha cursed them by thinking that 'no one' could get between them. i hope i'm wrong but i can't see it being that easy. so...sesshiles has kids? where they be? LOL. great update and keep it going
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Reviewed By: Star Keeper (not logged in) On: March 15, 2005 19:02 EST
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hehehe!! that was mean, but i think he needed it to help him face Kagome. i guess he was better off inebreated when he first saw her, then he wouldn't freak out. but still, that was HILARIOUS!! i shall laugh for a week now, arigato!! ~~~Starlett~~~
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 11:48 EST
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Mankee...that was a rotten trick...but very affective. Getting InuYasha away from the crowd was a good idea. Having him 'lose it' while surrounded by people wouldn't have helped the situation. Now he can say what he wants to say to Kagome without worrying someone else will hear...that is, just as soon as he comes around! LOL
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: March 13, 2005 22:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. give it up to inuyasha to pass out after seeing Kagome. no..no he hasn't changed at all, has he? LMAO. that was great!!!! i'm happy to see you updated the story, and what a wonderful update it was. funny thing, don't know if you know the song, but i was listening, while reading teh first part of the chapter, to Down with teh sickness, by disturbed adn it so fit. it really is, for the most part, InuYasha's song. hmm...now what i really really want to know is what did he do to her family? i have a sick sense it has something to do with her father but i shall reframe from commenting as of right now. great idea and story line...as always...keep it up and get some sleep!!! :-)
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: skaterpg guy (not logged in....I think) On: March 13, 2005 22:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! This is really really good. I cant wait for the next chapter.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! about time!!! ^_^ i'm i'm sorry to hear about you dad mine passed away 3/29/2004 of last year i hope you dont lose yours wouldn't want you in depresson now would we? well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: March 13, 2005 20:34 EST
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yeah!! InuYasha and Kagome!!! YEAH!!! I hope you get the surgery, you want the surgery, right? Well I hope you get what you want and that your father gets better. Demon
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 18:40 EST
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i hope your dad gets better. also, this was a great chapter and you most update soon. i must know what will happen between them! this story is great, do continue!!!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 13, 2005 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's not enough 10's in the world for this chapter! It was just outstanding!! I just love a story that can make you cry for joy and now I must wait for the next chapter and I hope it's soon...Don't think my heart could take it LOL! Yep! I love those Caribean Bird Youkias' They definatly be my favorite charaters in this story! Well I guess I'll be waiting with baited breath again for the next chapter so keep up the great success and prayers for the health of your father.
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Reviewed By: Fireminx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 08:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story! Good luck to your father:) I hope his surgery goes well.
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