| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: Arienishi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 00:32 EST
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sorry i havnt been reviewing. But i cant wait till Inuyasha and Kagome meet. I may be horrible of me but i want to see Inuyasha and Kagome get in a fight , him call her a name and lose his temper, and then him get sat. And then after that they make up. hahahah yah. So i hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 08, 2005 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it loved it loved it!! ^_^ keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 08, 2005 17:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an awesome chapter and now she's making them take her to see InuYasha, that is soooo cool. My prayers are with you and your family and I hope all goes well with your father...Will be waiting with baited breath for your next update....And thank you for sharing your story it's AWESOME!!!!
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Title: *smile* Better and better. . .
Reviewed By: weyrdkat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 02:34 EST
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hey littleolmee, It really seems like you're adding a bit more detail into your chapters. That makes it easier to get into and understand, although I must admit, it's still a bit bare for my taste. I like to be lost in their worlds. It's good though. The story line is definitely picking up in capture ability. I hope your dad pulls through okay, and I'm not rating this time cause I can't remember what I put last time and I don't want to put less. Take care! Ashli
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 08, 2005 00:14 EST
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Wow, InuYasha sure has come a long way from his hot-tempered, short-fused, rowdy hanyou...except for his mouth! -LoL- I eagerly await the next chapter. Best wishes for your father.
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: March 07, 2005 23:58 EST
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I hope your father's surgery goes well and update when you can...
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 07, 2005 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that's pretty intense. i would have loved to see an drugged out InuYasha running around, Shippo is so right. wow...booze and MJ huh? hehe, and who said that people back then didn't know about that stuff. poor yasha, was doing it without realizing it. really intersting twist over how he was able to control his youkai. i'm intrested how he was just able to do it, like an on and off switch. that's kind of creepy, a stoic inuyasha. ::shivers:: eep. anyway, great update and i wish you luck with your father and the surgery. all prayers are with you!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 07, 2005 14:24 EST
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Fantastic story, please update soon. Poor Inu, living all these centuries...and to think of all the streaming demons driving him, yikes! But, like Kagome, I've faith in him too.
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Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 07, 2005 03:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I just read this for the second time and it's the absolute Best!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please update soon, I want to know how drunk is InuYasha when he does see Kagome....LOL....Caribean Bird Youkai now that's a hoot!! I just love the charactors...
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Title: hey!!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (sry nsi) On: March 06, 2005 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i cna't believe you've got 13 chapters and there still not together yet! wow that's got to be some record! lmao! well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:49 EST
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great job! poor kagome, though. she is so sad that inuyasha won't come and see her. please have him do so soon!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 01:40 EST
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great update to the story. my heart bleeds for poor yasha...even though he is still a baka!!! i guess though, after reading this, i can see why it would be sooo hard for him to see her. ::shrugg:: now i can't wait to hear about rin adn shippo being raised by yash adn what he turned that poor sweet girl into! keep it up, great job as always!!!
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Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 05, 2005 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome chapter can't wait for the next so I'll see ya next time!!!!!
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Reviewed By: demonchik39 On: March 04, 2005 23:58 EST
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Yeah! Another chapter! Update soon!
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Title: Awww...Poor Puppy...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 20:35 EST
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Youkai madness...InuYasha almost losing his mind over Kagome's disappearance. It's a shame that it took such an agonizing condition for Sesshoumaru to acknowlege and accept his half-brother. All InuYasha ever wanted was acceptance. He had that for a short time with Kikyou and then Naraku fooled them into a vicious betrayal/death scenario. Then Kagome comes along and as time went by, her influence brought him friends and a home in her heart...only to have that home snatched right out from under him. At least his circle of friends remained but the damage had been done. -- Waiting is a tedious, monotinous and heartbreaking thing to do; the longer the wait, the harder the effects. What a storyline your playing with. I almost cried. Good chapter
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