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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 15:20 PDT
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Very interesting indeed. I'm excited that the story is progressing. Of course the citrus was a fabulous part too ;) Good luck with your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: SANicholas22-not sgined in On: October 07, 2010 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
INITAL THOUGHTS: OMFG. Wayyy to come back and leave us with a ciffy like that. Omgosh. That was amazing. I think a second read of it is almost a must. I wish that you had the next chapter already lined up though cause you just gave us just enough insight into what the big secret is, but without really giving us real information. I can't wait to here the history for this one. Now that i've got that out of my system: Sachi is one of my most favored reads and I'm glad that you're back. I can't wait for you're next chapter. This story is soo deep and the emotions and history behind everything feels so real when you're reading it. Much love!
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Reviewed By: JRKOD On: October 07, 2010 12:08 PDT
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Oh that ending!!!! Please update soon! Ive been waiting so long for you to continue, and that the last chapter, I couldnt stop!
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Title: Oh. My. God.
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 09:10 PDT
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I have to vent my frustration first: CAN THEY JUST DO IT ALREADY? Oh my God, woman, you are such a tease! Ahem. That said, I *lived* this chapter. Great character development, excellent use of the Hidaka sub plot, and real forward movement. Tremendous writing -- and hot as usual. Great work!
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Reviewed By: Nikiz bad habit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 08:34 PDT
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WOW!!! I'm speechless! Well not really, but it was just that amazing. At the edge of my seat the whole time. Things are moving along now, getting to all the juicy details of the past. The little hints of Kagome's memory that keep popping up and now Kikyou brought to light. I can't wait to learn more. I hope that Sesshomaru has some insight soon, although I'm a little nervous what it could be and how it will effect everyone. And Shippo, he does seem like the bearer of bad news quite offten. I wonder if this info will get him in trouble? I'm glad that the problem with Mr. Hidaka has been taken care of. Poor Kagome. Poor Mrs. Hidaka! He was such a sleez. I hope Mrs. H was the one with all the money- and she gets rid of him quickly! At least this pervert problem has helped with the Miko Powers issue a little bit. And Kagome knows now that Inuyasha doesn't hate her. The sexual tension between the two is really coming to a head I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Happy writing!
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 08:33 PDT
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Woo! Awesome chapter. When I saw in my inbox that this story had been updated I was quite excited. I loved the intimate moment that Inu and Kagome had, and the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter just sucked me back into the story. I love drama! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what you come up with for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Langus (not logged in) On: October 07, 2010 08:30 PDT
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As always, it was well worth the wait. I, for one, thoroughly enjoyed it. I've kept this story on my very short list of favourites for a few years now and have yet to be disappointed. Glad to hear you're back to your old self :) Best of luck with your writing.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 08:10 PDT
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Yay! So glad to see you post on Sachi again. Ugh, Inuyasha, again! How many times you gonna leave Kagome like that? You deserve to have your ass kicked. Loved the whole scene with Mr Hidaka, very well done very vicious retaliation on Inuyasha's part. I like that the memory of Kikyou isn't as much of a deterrent for Inuyasha as he'd hoped it would be.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 03:49 PDT
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I'm so glad that you're still working on this. It is a lovely story and I enjoy it very much. Mystery, suspense, action, angst, romance. This story has it all. I look forward to seeing more Sango and Miroku. Wow, you really teased us with Kagome's memories this time and I can't wait to find out about her past. I'm so glad that rapist was thrown out. He makes me want to vomit. I hope some wolves get him. *growls* Or...a big white dog with unusual facial markings. Yeah. Oh man, Inuyasha just had to say Kikyou's name. *facepalm* Shippou really dropped a bomb. Quite an eventful chapter. As always, I look forward to the next. ^_^
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 01:46 PDT
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Oh Man, that is, like, the worst time to mumble and ex-girlfriend's name, LOL! No matter what you do, you can't keep Inu from eating his feet on a regular basis. First misunderstanding Kag's problem and then saying THAT name in the middle of a lip lock rolling around on the floor. ROTFLMAO....I am SO glad that I'm not male. Worth the wait in every way, Quill and congrats on graduating. Well Done
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2010 01:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here I thought you had died. I REALLY hope you update soon. This is such a wonderful story. I'm very happy for the new chapter. You my friend are indeed a talented writer. By the way will Koga be in this?
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Reviewed By: EarthSong [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2010 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEECK! I love cliff hangers... and hate them. Soooooo glad you finally updated again! I was actually thinking about this story today, and wondering when the next chapter would come out, and low and behold, I checked my email and you uploaded it!!!! Totally made my day. XD Great chapter, beautifully written as always, and had me at the edge of my seat prettty much the entire time. LOVED IT!!! Ok enough with the squishy fan girl talk. Cant wait for the next one. :) Your devoted reader, EarthSong
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2010 20:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first let me start off with saying how glad I am you updated and that you are going to continue updating! Secondly, wow. Awesome chapter. I loved absolutely everything! The confrontation b/w Inu and the perv was wonderfully written. I was reading it with the biggest grin on my face! But arg! at the new situation with Kags and Inu. I know it had to be done, but I REALLY hate Kikyou! Hopefully things work out soon! Inu can be such a baka. I'm really interested to know what happened between him and Kikyou. Please update soon! Love it!
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2010 20:14 PDT
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Another great chapter, and I have to agree... things are definitely starting to get interesting! No worries about the time between updates. It takes me at least a couple months to get a new chapter up for my story I am writing on another site. Life happens, and as long as the story continues, I will be happy - especially when the story is as good as this one!
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Reviewed By: akhemi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2010 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really a fan now. I really love how you wrote your stories. Even with those long updates you never loose your touch and it keeps getting better. Seriously, I wouldn't even mind if I re-read the previous chapters starting from the beginning once a new chapter comes up even if I don't have to. Fics likes this always sticks on me ^_^ I really like how you present each pieces of scene and emotion/thought that led to how InuYasha and Kagome are right now; the first time that Kagome played shogi, the trip to Sounkyo, that first kiss, that moment in the attic and then that... that conversation when Kagome decided to talk about Hidaka, I was laughing so hard at how InuYasha was interpreting it and suddenly not a laughing matter anymore because it got too hot. Gosh! That was intense!lol! I was having a hard time focusing on the already changed scene and was laughing again when InuYasha did that punch of frustrated lust.lol! We'll not just his past but the rest of Sachi's residents. I also can't wait to read more of Miroku and Sango's encounters... whew! That was another intense one!lol! The sequence of events kind of confused me on the last chappie but it's nothing major that it hurt =) Maybe I was just expecting too much that the next scenes would be about their reactions to Kagome suddenly unleashing her miko powers, which was addressed on the latter part of the chapter. And that scene with Sesshoumaru and Jaken, it was so Miroku to send him that "cute" picture of InuYasha and Kagome, hehe Well, I guess that's it for now. I'll be waiting patiently..... for your next chappie. *hint hint nudge nudge* ^_^ Hope you'll also give the same love for Waiting On A Wish! Ja!
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