| "The Odd Couple" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
Title: awesomly cool
Reviewed By: mystery_saiya_jin@hotmail.com On: April 13, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! *gives thumbs up* AWESOMELY AWESOME!!! ~~~ Me
|
Title: *in a bad mood*
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: April 03, 2005 09:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOO! *slaps Vegeta* NO! BAD OUJI!! *huggles Goku* Poor Goku!!! *glares at Vegeta* Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
|
Title: Ch.14
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 23:33 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO!!!!!! Vegeta and Goku are already fighting?? No,no,no not good. >< I don't want them to hate eachother...poor Goku, it's like he had his heart broke. I hope they make up soon. And I hope Vegeta doesn't try to take over the saiyans yet. What's he going to do? What's gonna happen?? C'mon I'm at the edge of my seat here!! Please write more!! Update soon!!!
|
Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was great. I've never read a DBZ fic, and I don't really plan on looking in any archives, but this was so good, I had to read after the first chapter! I love how you portray both Goku and Vegeta. Goku is especially fun to read, and somehow, though he always seems in character, Vegeta often manages to surprise me. The title is great too. Anyway, love it, write more soon please!
|
Reviewed By: Webtester001 On: April 02, 2005 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooh more angst. And forward progress. I look forward to more.
|
Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: April 02, 2005 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Wowie, thats a cliffhanger. Thats was mean of Vegeta too...he really seems intent on this. Goku may have his work cut out on though, so I'm going to look forward to seeing how he copes with this. Interesting chapter, and looking forward to the next.
|
Reviewed By: Kaemon On: March 25, 2005 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!
|
Title: O.O
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: March 17, 2005 02:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it!!! MORE!!! MORE I say!!!!
|
Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: March 16, 2005 15:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooh, nice lemon. Mmm. seme Goku, and ukey Vegeta + good detail= fricken good lemon. Heh, I liked it when Goku kicked Kakarot's ass too. Must be embarassing for him, hehehe. *grabs pom-poms* Go Goku! Go Goku! Hey, he was on a roll in this chapter. Got the villian, and the guy.
|
Title: Ch.13
Reviewed By: VgGkYaoiGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 13:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter Jana. U never cease to amaze me. Ur lemon was detailed and well written as always. Uke Vegeta + Seme Goku = Very sexy! =P Lol I was really happy that Goku kicked Kakarotto's ass. That guy really deserved it. I wonder what'll happen next? Hmm well u gotta keep me posted by writng some more!! Great work as always!! Update soon!!!
|
Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! That was so hot! ~shudders~ Loved the way that Goku showed Kakarotto who was boss. May be in for a bit of trouble though. Loved it!
|
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: I Love Trunks Briefs On: March 08, 2005 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SUPER DOOPER FUNNY!!!! I'M ROTFLMAO!!! GOKU IS SOOOOO FUNNY WHEN HE IS IN FRONT OF PEOPLE HE SHOULD BE AFRAID OF!!! ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY CALL HIM A SLUT!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *takes a deep breath* I'm okay... ((this is MysterySaiyan... i'm just not signed in!!! :P))
|
Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: March 08, 2005 14:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Oohhh It's a stare down! What a cliffhanger! I loved the way Vegeta was grinning at Kakarotto though, that was so funny when he was grinnnig devilishly when Kakarotto realised it was him. Nice touch! Looking forward to the next chapter!
|
Reviewed By: x The Chichi Slaughter House x On: March 08, 2005 05:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I do hope Goku flares into Super Saiyan and knocks his ass down! Down biatch! *slaps Kakarotto* Kakarotto: *attacks* AAAHHHHHHHHH SAVE MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *crickets chirp*
|
Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know Vegeta knows who's gonna win! Go Goku! Woot! That Goku look alike is SO gonna get his ass kicked! please write the next chapter soon! ^o^
|
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
