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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi again sry) On: April 14, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so................................................... Gonna give me a hint to who or what Demonoe is gonna be? ^_________________________^ well i hope ya found a good one for it but if i does turn out to be a person then i can have my friend scan my pic a drew of him to show ya!! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Title: ^__________________________________________^
Reviewed By: InuYashasLovelorn (nsi sry) On: April 14, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's not mean i only put it in there to confuz you!! ^__^ ittai na nada kono mushi wa desu ka is jap for "Is there a fly in my soup?" lmao i thought you might get a kick out of it if ya translated it!!! my friends are in japanese but i'm not so i just pick up things from them well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 15:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um...skool killed my brain, so I'll just say update again soon. "my brain just fell out, can I go home now?" ja ne!
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: April 13, 2005 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i just finished reading the latest chap and plz o plz update soon ur story is soo cool and i can't wait to read more Xiantaru^^
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: April 13, 2005 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job keep up the good work and keep updating
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Reviewed By: Christy (lovereadingGWTW@yahoo.com) On: April 12, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooooooooooooo--i cant believe u stopped there(grr)--- i love your story. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Yeah! good job. seriously. U have a few grammar/spelling mistakes but not enough to bug me. The story is too good that i have to keep reading. Keep writing or else i will hunt u down and strap u to a computer.jk of course-im not that insane :) keep up the great work and ill keep reviewing!!!
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Title: cliffy....ARG
Reviewed By: moogle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
noooo....so short XD. well its gonna have me coming back thats for sure. (btw i'm not a poetry fan, so havent read :D)
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (too lazy to login) On: April 12, 2005 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter as always. So... what's in the sketch book? I cant wait till you post the next chapter.
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Title: nananananananana
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 12, 2005 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... lmao that was a bit funny and i liked you name Rykousha as a sword of course being me i would have named it Donshuunouo (big fish)(hehehehe) or somthing like Demonoe (i think it's a kool name) well anyhwo i've given my thoughs keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE? oh and....Ittai na nada kono mushi wa desu ka?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 20:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have no idea what any of the names mean that you've got for Kagome's sword. Sorry I can't help you there. but I do still like the fic, update again.!! ja ne! krgfdflaeo;vbujoadfi;gjaeo;ri vj jhgl;sdv;laisdjgo;ajigo'ua'jasorry, I got agittated at my computer, it's evil, won't accept the spam code thingy.
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Title: WHIGGDA LIGABSUMU
Reviewed By: IGGA DIGGA BADU On: April 11, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: niftyness
Reviewed By: moogle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm loving this series, keep it up and keep pumping out the oishi material =)
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Title: fun-ness!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw, so cute! I like this story! Wet puppies are so cute but stinky! Lol! I hope you continue! Don't you hate it when romantic moments and compromising positions are interrupted?...that sucks! Keep writing, yay!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol That was an awesome chappy! I loved the ending! It sucks getting caught by ur parents after u & ur bf were jus making out. Well they were almost kissing but same thing. Of course the fact that theyre all wet would make it look suspicious. Well cant wait to hear Kag & Inu explain to her mom. UPDATE SOON!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 09, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wet dog's that just reminds me that mine looks more like a mop that way then normal!!! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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