| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 23:03 CDT
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Hi again! weee, I still care cuz I'm obviously reviewing. so, ya, do the update thingy again and all. I'm at a super big writers block and wouldn't know a good idea right now if it smacked me in the face screaming 'You super big baka, I can help you with all your fics! Just use me!' now I look back at what it's screaming, and it just looks so wrong. Sorry I can't help you in the idea department, I believe I just explained why. so, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter: 9 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Title: hiya!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: April 02, 2005 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
too tired to write must sleep no staying up till 2am again then waking up earlie! ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz................
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:21 CST
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HI! uh...update again soon and stuffs and all. um, darn I forgot. I review cuz I care. Wow, I care about alot of people! whelps, I gotta go to my cousins comfirmation now, so, bye!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter 8 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!!!
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Title: grr,.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi On: March 29, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrr... evil cliffy!!!!!
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Title: Chapter Four
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: March 29, 2005 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The feathers at the end of an arrow are the Fletching and the tree is Goshinbou
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Reviewed By: inubrat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERUS i like it i love it i wont to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:10 CST
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*gasp* NO! Not the evil cliffy! How could you be so MEAN to your devoted fans?! lol just kidding. But really... PLEASE update again soon.
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Reviewed By: reviewing On: March 28, 2005 21:49 CST
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That made absolutely no sense. Kagome was helpless when Kouga was about to rape her and then all the sudden she can pick him up by the neck and threaten him a minute later? Poor writing skills... incorrect spelling... extreme grammar problems... You need help. GET A BETA!!!!
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Title: 0000
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter: 7 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter: 6 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao that's funny you've got spanish in a fanfic! ^__^ well keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: WEEEEE!
Reviewed By: Kaiku On: March 24, 2005 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait till u put up chapter seven...!!!! pls update soon!!! contact me when u update!!! thnx! azn_babe56@hotmail.com .... bye!!!
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Title: this is great for a first timer
Reviewed By: uni_youkai (offline) On: March 20, 2005 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im a first time fanfic writer too and this is really good keep up the good work hun and i hope to see chap 6 very soon btw i have one on here called where we first met if you are interested in seeing my work
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