| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it was a great story hopefully you write more chapters. Well i loved it. and if you do write more chapters i will write more reviews. Well please email me at krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com . When you write more chapters. and if you do.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi as always) On: July 19, 2005 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mwahahahaha, sesshy is sooooo gonna get katara back! of course i will read your friend's fic! i am always looking for a good fic! update soon!
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Reviewed By: amantes2 On: July 19, 2005 17:46 CDT
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X.X X.x x.X o>o Okay, short but pretty good.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi) On: July 06, 2005 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA! OMIGOD!!! LOL THAT WAS SOOOOOO WRONG!!! *dies laughing* Ah man, Kags is teh ebil!!! loved this, can't wait for the next update! Sesshy and Katara better have made up! They are fighting senselessly!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Teeheehee. ^_^ That was beautifully sinful! I love it. I'm going to go to bed now and have wonderful dreams. Thank you. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 18:50 CDT
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revenge is sweet!!!! very, erm, interesting chappie, update soon please
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Title: I like the chapter, but I still hate you
Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: July 04, 2005 02:02 CDT
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I like the story, and I think you where mean to sess, meh, who cares? He needs someone to shove a long rod down his throut.I still hate you for the other story.
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Title: Whole story
Reviewed By: crimson warrior On: June 29, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great but can you make the feeling for each other a little less dense. Like Kagome keeps thinking inuyasha loves Kik, oh and try to speed up Mir/San there feelings of love to each other. One more thing don't go to crazy with the elemental powers. Sorry one last thing if Inu, Kag, San, or Mir are killed than your a fucking asshole for that GOT IT!
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Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good lemon, but may i suggest a little more detail. But it was a very good chapter. I exspecially like how sess was kicked out of his own room.
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Title: Lolz
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (NSI) On: June 20, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So wrong...can't wait til you update again!!!
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Title: gross
Reviewed By: mistressofmoonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 12:37 CDT
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if katara is kagome's aunt then sesshy is her uncle whish makes Inu related to her in some way by marraige although my guess is he is probably one of those twoce removed on my dad's uncles side type relatives. THAT'S SO WIERD! So that means Rin would be her cousin by marraige and would she call Sesshy uncle? So many twisted things... *runs and grabs Kouga, hugging him tightly. "I love you Kouga!" Kouga prays to the heavens, "I love her a lot, but must she be so clingy?" The heavens open up and say, "Yes." Kouga asks why. The heavens say, "cuz torturing you is so damned fun." Kouga sighes in defeat adn looks around for me, I come out with a whip. "Kouga..."* Kouga would't rape kagome. He's actually quite nice. He's one of the better demons. If you want to give him a mate, please let me be her! Long black hair with purple streaks and blue tips hair, green eyes, the marking of a cherry petal on my forehead, wrists, and back. Aqua wolf ears, and pale, almost whtie skin. Name- Namida. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! Good story by the way.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 19:04 CDT
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really good for your first try at a lemon. update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Some Dude1234567890 On: June 19, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent chapter! KEEP IT UP *some dude gives this story a two thumbs up* (b^_^)b
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Reviewed By: morbid-angel On: June 19, 2005 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, love your new characters,and me like smutty goodnes. Now all you kneed to do is bring that same amount of plesure into Inuysaha and Kagome's relationship. What exactly is the relationship between Miroku and sango? I cant wait for the next chapter. What will Katara do to Seshomeru for revenge? please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plot twist! Dude, that ending was completely unexpected. I like. The lemon was very well done as well. Keep up the good writing! ^_^
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