| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Title: WTF!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inukaglover815 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WTF!!!!!!!! I don't know what that dumb person who gave u that hate review u told us bout in chap 9 is talking about. They are so out of whack it's not even funny! Don't listen to a word they say. Your story is awsome.
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Title: Woot-ness!
Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great stuff, great stuff. Miroku should learn to keep his mouth shut...oh well. Love the story! Yay! Lemon chappie coming up! ^_^ Anyways keep writing cuz you're good at it!
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Title: wow... great OC in your story
Reviewed By: Narakus_Incarnation [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I have to say great work! At first I wasn't really into the story... but now... *eye twitches* PLEASE UPDATE...SOON! If you don't..I...I *falls on floor twitching* (chants to self) "must read about Katura"(is that how u spell it?) *Kagura swoops in* there you are baka *secures baka in strait jacket while I continue to twitch* *kagura pulls feather out of her hair and leaves*
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Narakus_Incarnation [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first read this story, I wasn't too into it, but now...*eye twitches* um..PLEASE UPDATE! *falls on floor twitching* AHH! *Kagura walks in rolling her eyes, picks twitching person up and walks out, shaking her head*
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: June 05, 2005 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ouch, 700 years?? I like your chapter, really good
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
fun, fluffy, scary and funny. all in one chappie, good job! update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Some Dude1234567890 On: June 05, 2005 01:44 CDT
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I sat on my chair and read it all in one sitting LOL! AWESOME FANFIC! YOU MUST CONTINUE!!
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Reviewed By: OH MY GOD On: May 28, 2005 19:20 CDT
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ok first inuyasha becomes human on the new moon not the full moon as it says in chapter 20 and i cant believe you brought elemental powers into this this is going to become so confusing i mean now she can probably do all kinds of crap and i really hate it when other people become stronger than inuyasha it just shouldn't happen and also it would be cool if kagome got a rosary like inuyasha then when she went full deamon he could put her into the ground
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Title: Yay.
Reviewed By: donnie_fae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really love the story, but I'm a bit worried about the spelling and puncuation... Anyways, thanks for killing off Kikyo (muhahahaha) and making Kagome just like Inuyasha!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i* On: May 22, 2005 21:41 CDT
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its getting better and better and better and better and....you know where I'm going with this! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: May 22, 2005 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great addition to the story, and an interesting food for the thought.
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Reviewed By: mauigirl On: May 22, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter but kagome and inuyasha kneed to talk about what happened so that they can get togather and be happy. Inuyasha needs to have trouble getting the words out though. Sango and Miroku need to get togathor and have a sweet night of passion. It would be so cute if Rin got a crush on Shippo, cant you just see Rin huging shippo and kissing him on the cheek. :D Oo and did kagome make it rain when she was sad and inuyasha was human? well any way that was a great chapter and to recap Kagome needes to know the truth about Inuyashas fealings, she needed learn how to use her powers, sango and miroku kneed to get down, and Rin should develope a crush on Shippo. Update soon. -The Maui Chick
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 17:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know something, every chapter is a cliffie in a way, because it's not over so technically it's still a cliffie, just not an evil one. ya, I have too much free time. Update again please. ja ne!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi) On: May 22, 2005 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was a fluffy chapter! It would have been cool if Kags was the Shiiri (is that how you spell it??) DOes Kags get to dance for InuYasha?? LOL!! oh, btw, great food for thought. Very true!
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Title: CANT STOP REVIWING
Reviewed By: bakasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!! -bakasgirl
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