| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
| Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] |
Title: loved it
Reviewed By: bakasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it but the rateing only let me go to 10 T_T crys hevily im bad at spealing too! crys again love from a big fan -bakasgirl
|
Title: coolies
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 (nsi) On: May 19, 2005 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wark! what a chappie! lol, can't wait to find out more about katara. but hold on, if sesshy mates katara, and kagome is katara's niece, and that makes kagome sesshy's "niece", and sesshy and inu are half brothers...Kags has no relation whatsoever to inu, right??
|
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That food for thought is true and so sad. ^_^ I really like Katara. Good character. The twist was really nice. I hope Kagome gets to meet her father!!! Hope your exams went well. Update soon if you can, but school comes first. Later days!
|
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: May 18, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am lovin u're story! this is great, all though sess didn't say much this chapter.
|
Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
food for thought, sadly true. but that doesn't mean that you can't kick the hell out of them ^_^ fun chappie and stuff. weeeeeeeee *spins around the room* THUD ow, @.@ having brains doesn't make up for a lack of common sense. ja!
|
Reviewed By: mauisarah On: May 18, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great, I want to know more though. rin is cute and inuyasha will come around. I cant wait for the next chapter. update soon
|
Title: 99th review :P
Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: May 18, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:O Wowo, sort of powerful in the chapter, xpesialy the language, a little stronger than I'm use to reading, 'psecialy toward Kag. Bah, I'm babblin'... Okay, I really like your story, and Havent had a chance to read Titanic, Inuyasha stile.
|
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
walks up handing the director a note, and points to the right, SPELLING 101...and waves as she leaves... Japanese words/phrases: -chan = suffix added to emphasize a close friendship or addressing someone younger -sama = suffix added for added respect or for someone higher than you (roughly translates to "Lord" or "Lady") -san = suffix meaning something along the lines of Mr/Mrs/Miss, also can be added for respect arigato (bb/n) = thanks daijoubu = it's alright / it's okay / I'm okay / I'm alright / etc. -- daijoubu ka = are you alright? (remember, 'ka' is a spoken question mark!) hanyou = half-youkai (see youkai) haori = a short over-kimono jacket thing (Inuyasha's is red… just to give you an idea ;-) ) Hiraikotsu = Sango's trademark giant boomerang made of bone (and it's really heavy AND destructive… Go Sango!) houshi = monk / priest (but monk is a better translation) (Miroku is often addressed as Houshi or Houshi-sama) kami = deity (or deities) / god(s) / supernatural being(s) --kami-sama = a very respectful way of addressing said kami kitsune = fox koishii = a term of endearment (i.e. lover, my love, yada yada yada…); in other words, mushy / fluffy stuff ;-) matte = wait miko = priestess or shrine maiden nani = (slang) what / what is it neko = cat ni-hezumi = cloth made from the fur of a fire-rat demon (referring to Inuyasha's red haori and hakama, serves as rudimentary armor) ningen = human oi = hey okaa-san = mother (respectful way of addressing one's m |
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
..walks over, slaps the director, turns, grabs a shovel, walks in the direction of Kikyo muttering shit about dead bitchs should stay dead...few seconds later...FWANG!...walks back in wiping her hands off and sighs...OOOK, where was I? Oh, good job, continue. Dont mind me. ^-^
|
Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
|
Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i whant to read more. will you keep wrighting and soon?
|
Reviewed By: Lilitha Chaos On: May 11, 2005 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have just now got to read your fanfic and I love it so far. I do not like to use the rating thing much because I just...don't. Anyways the over all rating to me would be nine out of ten. I hope that you will update it soon so I can know what will happen. ^^
|
Title: Coolies!!
Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo good!!! I read all of it just today!! Awesome story!! (Also, if you still need a Beta reader or sumthin, my e-mail addy is mari@cityofshalom.com, feel free to send me anything!!)
|
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I CANT WAIT TO HEAR MORE FROM YOUR BRILIANT MIND!
|
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love Chapter:20 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
|
| Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] |
