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"Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ]
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 Reviewed By: animereader [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2005 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
noooooo--such a mean cliffy-grrrrr
 Reviewed By: ashtonreed (too lazy to login)  On: May 09, 2005 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
well that was... odd. Great chappy, but you shouldnt make Sessy's mate faint while she's pregnant. Tsk, tsk. You know it's not good for the baby lol. Cant wait to read the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: mauisarah  On: May 09, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was great but enough with the cliffys I wanna know what happens. make the next chappie as long as you can and give all the info you can as well i wanna know what happens. ok thanks.
 Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2005 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought that that fluffy thing over his shoulder was his tail....well, I'm an idiot then. update soon, and quit with the damn cliffies!! ja.
 Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.*  On: May 09, 2005 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lurv the new chappies! Sorry I haven't reviewed...I've been in L.A. for 4 days. There's a mistake I noticed--Sesshomaru actually does have a tail. You know the big fluffy boa-like thing that always draped around him? Well if you really pay attention, there's only one end. The other end is attached to his bum. It took me a really long time to figure that out, though, so I doubt very many people have noticed it. And also: on my last review you didn't know what I meant. What I meant was that when you kept changing paces it was kinda confusing. Like when you went really fast it was like: Ex. The girl brushed her teeth, combed her hair, and went to bed. That may seem good, but it is very plain and needs more description. You have done that a couple of times. The other part of othe problem is when you go to slow. This doesn't happen very much but its happen a few times. What you sometimes do is dwell on the same subject for a little too long. Just try not to go on and on about something, k? Omg...I just re-read what I just wrote and I hope I'm not being too harsh!! Eek! I'm trying not to sound like a meany...I'm only trying to help, so if you think I'm being a doody head, I'm sorry. Just keep in mind that I will always love and cherish you and your fics. Muah! Please update soon!!!
 Title: i'm like never signed in am i?
Reviewed By: InuYashasloveLorn (nsi sry)  On: May 09, 2005 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lmao you believe in the tail to? everyone keeps telling me it's a pelt of fur from his father but i saw the 3rd movie and his father had a tail to!!! but his was really diffrent! wel keep up the good work and update again soon!!! ^_____^
 Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2005 08:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, the error was supposed to be in green and there's no color that I can see. So what I meant is that InuYasha accidently says he forgot it was a full moon instead of a new moon. Sorry.
 Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 09, 2005 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love the food for thought. You have to get another chapter up today or I'll cry! Pleeeease!!!!! The suspence is killing me. Also, I noticed a small error you may want to fix. InuYasha stopped in his tracks. The new moon? How could he have forgotten?... "Fuck fuck fuck", he muttered over and over. Sango and Miroku noticed InuYasha had stopped and was now muttering to himself. "Um InuYasha is there something wrong", Sango asked. "I forgot that it's the full moon tonight. Just thought you'd want to know. Keep writing! ^_^
 Title: a review from your bestest friend!!!!!(right?)
Reviewed By: MERCY_LUVS_YA  On: May 07, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HEY RACH IT WAS AWSOME. YOUR REALLY GOOD AT WRITING. KEEP AT IT ITS REALLY AWSOME!!!!THERE BETTER BE ALOT MORE CHAPTERS! ITS SAD I DONT EVEN WATCH INU YASHA AND I FIND YOUR FANFIC REALLY HOT! SO GOTTA GO! FINISH 20 NOW!!!!!! LUV YA! MERCY ARE YOU HAPPY YOU HAVE 82 NOW!
 Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
update again soon. I liked today's food for thought. sounds like something that me or one of my friends would come up with. ^_^ ja!
 Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry)  On: May 05, 2005 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hiya miss me? lmao i know you did!!! ^__^ anywho a beta reader is a editor for you fanfic and i know some people if some dont say that they want to do it! ^__^ well back to the reviews i loved it!!!! keep up the good work and update again soon pleaSE? and let me guess the person Sesshy wanted Kagome to met is Demonoe?!?!?!!?! lmao keep up the good work and update again soon please? pleasE? pleasE? i'll give you a COOKIE!!!!!
 Title: Secrets And Changes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
 Title: Woohoo!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 08:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yea! When my email alerted me that you had posted the new chapter I was so happy!!! I notices a major improvement in your spelling and grammar by the way. You still have some kinks, but you're improving and that's what counts. IN answer to your BETA question...as far as I know it is a simple spell-checker. It usually comes standard in most writing programs. Microsoft Word definately has one. So if you were to start writing in that program, you can simply spell check with a small button. I really enjoyed this chapter. But you have me wigging on what Sesshomaru wants. You have to get the next chapter up of I'll go insane thinking on. Pretty please with sprinkles!!! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 05, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:19 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
 Reviewed By: lesalee [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 04, 2005 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story, very interesting ^^.... Just one thing, 'te quiero' in spanish means 'I want you', 'te amo' means 'I love you' (sorry, it's the grammar nazi coming out in me). Again, great story!
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