| "Secrets and Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 155 ] |
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 20:21 CDT
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YAY! you updated! When are we gonna find out what that star means??? I loved the chappy! Update SOON
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Title: ahhhhhh
Reviewed By: InuyashasLoverTigerLily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2005 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've caught my interest....UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ. i'll find you and grovel at your knees if you dont :)!Font Color
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Title: This story rocks!!!
Reviewed By: Tenshi Sukenami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is the best I have read on this site! I love it and can't wait for the next posting. You already realize you have a spelling and grammar problm, and I comend you for trying to improve it by continueing to write. I do have a suggestion, if you can't get to a BETA, or simply don't want to use one, try rereading your story a day after you write it and see if you can spot your own mistakes. You'd be amazed what you can spot and how much it helps you practice. I still use that technique. Also, in the second to last entry, you mention that InuYasha had never seen Kagome naked when she was a hanyou. BUt technically he saw her naked when Kouga nearly raped her. Did I misunderstand or did everything just happen so quick that Inuyasha rreally didn't get to see anything? Just wondering. Otherwise, keep up the great work. I'm definately putting you in my favorites list. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:18 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: mauisarah On: May 02, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter and I cannot wait until wensday when the next chapter comes out. all i want is to have a long chapter that explains what seshomeru happens to know. thank you
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*n.s.i.* On: May 02, 2005 18:46 CDT
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It was pretty good...but i know you could do better. I like where the story is going but at times its a little too slow and at others its too fast. Try and keep it at one pace, if you know what I mean? Yesa, but, its pretty good. Just get the next chappie OUT! lol...okay well if you need anymore japanese words you just let me know! Okay byebye. xoxo.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 15:52 CDT
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tanks for updateing. Um....I'd say more, but Geometry has melted my brain. bye!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: :P..i hate this name thing On: April 29, 2005 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look at all those reviews...nice. I"M LOVEING THIS STORY. Keep up on the up dates, i can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: EquineBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 22:44 CDT
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This is one of the best sotries i have read...Please keep going and updadte really soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: sexychicklet17*logged out* On: April 28, 2005 21:25 CDT
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I frigging hate cliffies!!! Update like friday!! Please!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animereader [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 20:52 CDT
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yeah!!!kikiyo die!!!mwahaha--i cant believe the awful cligffy --grrr- but we all know she isnt going to die cause then ur story would stink!!--update soon
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 09:47 CDT
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update soon please. I'd say more, but my illness is preventing it. bye!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 03:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:17 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Amantes2 On: April 27, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter, sorry I didn't review last chapter, for some reason, and I figured out why, it wouldn't let me make a review. This is one of the best stories I have ever read, and I think you should continue it and people need to review or they don't get stories, that the problem. They think that a story is already formatted, but fail to notice that it isn't, each chapter in improvised and their opinions and ideas should be heard to make he story better. I know, I'm an author aswell.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:16 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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