| "The Chosen" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Title: plz update
Reviewed By: brocolli stinks On: August 24, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update story is so good i luv the pairings
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Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update it has been a long time please tell me its only writers block so ya bye and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 17:36 CDT
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update its been soooooo long
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Title: The Chosen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: I_HAVE_NO_NAME [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... Great story i really like it plz update more though
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Reviewed By: ehu On: July 08, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah!!! you updated! still an awesome story, and now it's going to get really interesting! please update soon!
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: namidajoshi On: July 07, 2005 12:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story except for ONE pairing. Kouga and Deathstrike. KOUGA IS MINE! I'm not signed in right now but had I been my name would appear as 'kougasmate' I LOVE HIM ALOT! THREE YEARS I'VE LOVED HIM!!!! anyway, great story. Inu should be a terrier. Cuz, well, it would be funnier.
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Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: Hikaru-RoseRed [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot Dang!! i love this story so far!! if i remeber correctly you said that you would like suggestions? well if i did remeber i think you should have rin/kohaku (not sure how to spell that, but sango's lil bro) and have a character of your own with shippo. hehe nothing to deep for them tho! but please contniue to update your story!! and write others too when this one is finished. I love your style and crativity, i think that fluffymister doing that to kagome was unfair to her. omg! sessy got his butt kicked! that was nice but he ended up winning. them all going into heat was an intrestiong touch. but still WOW!!! that was awsome!! im really loveing this fic btw Hikaru_person is also me beause for some reason i cant stay loged in to post a comment.
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i almost fell over laughing when Kagome muttered "oh shit.." LOL im sorry i just cant stop haha laughing hahahahaha sorry lol..oh my how will Kagome get out of this one..? Maybe they have a "memory take away-er" like in Fruits Basket? LOL IM SORRY I CANT STOP LAUGHING! sesshomaru is just to damn sexy so i shall call him lord sexymaru! i will name him sexymaru, and he shall be my sexymaru, and he shall be mine! *thats from Finding Nemo 4 u who dont kno..* ^_^; keep up da good work!!
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Title: holy cow
Reviewed By: Hikaru-Person On: July 01, 2005 23:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said Holy Cow. So far I really like your story. Mind you i have only read the frist chapter so far. I Gave you a 10 for your style of writing becuase your format is nice and easy to read. I gave you a 9 for spelling and grammer becuase i think you had a few typos. I gave you a 10 for originality and creativity becuase i have not read a story with this kind of plot befor and it is very creative. I gave you a 10 for enjoyment factor becuase i love reading it. i didnt want to stop to eat dinner. hehe, and for your overall rateing a 10 beacuse i like the story. I hope that you continue to up-date this story and hopefully write more. good luck.
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Title: meanny
Reviewed By: Reke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell was that sesshomaru fluff with some one other than shadow and why was it kagome you little who dare you do that to kagome *glars death at you* that was the meanest thing some on has ever done to little old kagome i can't belive you did that *camls down* Bye Bye and please update soon
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Reviewed By: Keisha On: June 30, 2005 23:57 CDT
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wow this chapter was kind of disturbing....in good way. lol. sharing mates, wow. good chapter though, update sooner!! :)
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Reviewed By: ehu On: June 22, 2005 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just discovered your story today, and i gobbled up every single chapter i could find! it's really a very well developed storyline (in my opinion anyways)with just the right blend of adventure, intrigue, love and *winks* lemons. but yes, looking forward to the next chapter! happy writing!
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Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 07:57 CDT
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update fast please i want to know what happens
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Title: The Chosen
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 02:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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