| "The Chosen" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Story Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A teddy, (whistle), I would not have thought of that as a birthday present, or the vibrator. I like the fact that Souta will one day become a half-demon too.
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Reviewed By: black_dragon_keeper On: March 01, 2005 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story! I love it. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems to be getting better the further I read. Maybe you could write a chapter or two of Truth or Dare.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter 3 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: facsrne5 On: February 25, 2005 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really interesting to read, please continue it (even if you don't get six reviews). I really like the idea of this 17th birthday stuff. After you tell what happened to Kagome, you should have her and InuYasha together right away. Or to through a crazy (sick) twist in, have her get together with Shadow or Death Strike (eww!). It would be an interesting twist (I know, I'm sick).
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that this is a Inu/Kag pairing. I like to see those two get together, and also I'd like it if Kagome removed that damn collar from around Inuyasha's neck. Lastly, I would like to request a lemon where Kagome is wearing lingerie.
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad for a first timer. You should really hurry up and tell every one what happened to kagome! and you could also add a twist like have Kagome bethrod to sesshomarou or somebody to add alittle excitment anyway great story you should continue it.
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