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Reviewed By: my real name is really woody On: July 02, 2009 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
what to say..... your an excellent writer I've been reading many peoples story's and it occurred to me that some of you really should write a book or something i mean you have the creativity to do it.. i don't know XD
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 00:03 CDT
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it seems really good but you havent updated since 05... so i wont get my hopes up... im not even gonna read it... boy am i glad i checked that before i got past the first chapter...
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Reviewed By: DanceOfTheHeavens [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like sindel/naraku/kikyo lemon everbody tunrs and stares "hentai" someone coughs what whats wrong with that anyway loved it
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Title: WHAT!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DanceOfTheHeavens [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waahhhhhhhhh please please do another chapter it was excellent waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh *sniff* why do you torture us so why waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh plz do another chapter the story was excellent hey are you wiccan dont have to ansewr if you dont well love the story pl;z do more
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Title: Ch. 9
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter. One question I would like to ask you; do you plan on pairing Ayame with one of your characters in a future chapter? If not, I'm thinking of writing something taking place after her fight with your OC Death Strike. I might have to use your OC's in passing with your permission of course. Anyway, keep up the good work and I hope to see an update with this story.
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Title: FFRG Review Ch. 2
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 17:04 CST
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The first thing I noticed was the misspelling of Kaede. That really should be fixed, she is a recurring character in the anime/manga, and her name is spelled, both in English and Japanese versions, "Kaede". There are some rough grammatical issues (ie, missing commas, some misspellings, such as "handy work" is not two words but one: "handiwork"). Overall, I'd have to say that the general use of asterisks is a little daunting and could be handled better by use of italics to set it apart, and with a bit of dialogue (which might be there in prior chapters) as to the idea that the twins can communicate telepathically, though it does come clear that they're doing this in their interactions with each other, which, I wanted to say, was very interesting. I do not mind WELL done OCs, and yours appear to be fairly well thought out. They don't interrupt overall story flow, and this is a great thing. I was entertained, and while there were a few rough spots in the characterization of Sesshoumaru, I think that you are doing fairly well with a canon character that tends to be quite hard to write well. Keep up the hard work, it really shows! Thank you for submitting to FFRG!
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so awesome i cant wait till the next chapter
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Title: just a simple complement
Reviewed By: kitten^._.^ On: November 16, 2005 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i read fanfiction often, and yours was sooo captivating. i found your style of writing, and creativity amazing. since i read about 10 completely finished fics in one day i found that was astounding. most i dont really care for but your kept me at the end of my seat. i gave your spelling a 9 cause quite was spelled "quit" rather often. i was curious as to how you know about wiccan ways. are you a wiccan like me? i find myself wanting to know more about you as your fic was pure enjoyment for me and must have come from quite the fun person, i cant wait for the next chapters. if you ever wanna chat my e-mail address is unholyangel807@aol.com. i truly hope you keep writing, you have a gift. oh just to calm any odd though, i am not a perverted old man or anything like that, i am a 17 year old from jersey that love anime, and reading, tho i have a perverted mind at time but who doesnt. well hope to hear from ya. kitten^._.^
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!its taking forever!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!UPDATE
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Reviewed By: IHAVENONAME On: November 05, 2005 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating....Great chapter....i checked ur website btw thats cool stuff =]..............didnt log in srry...-_-
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 18:23 CST
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Took me a little while to read it, but I liked it. ^^ update again soon please ^^tra la la
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Reviewed By: Stealth Spike83 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story I love the way you leave us all in suspense with tha cliff hangers but I wish you would update more often. this is by far the best fanfic I have read so far and I have read alot. I also took a look at your beads and think that you have great talent there as well so keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: khmerboy001 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is hot! although u shoulf really update it more often. i just love this story. Update soon please. Don't keep us waiting in suspense
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 14:13 CST
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Truely this story is the most original I have ever read. But the suspense is killing me!!!!! It took forever for you to update!!!!!! plz update sooner!!!!! plz I gotta know what this powerful legend is that is supposed to be kagome!!!!! plz plz update soon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: going-SuperNova [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok i usually go for kags and sesshy one buts this one was way to good to stop reading damn you lol and i started to read this with my freind and she dorve me bonkers just to get me to read it so i have to hand it to you your are a good write question WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE IM GETTING BORED WAITING FOR IT TO UPDATE AND YEA IT IS A GOOD ONE AND it has tons of things i find humorous and i people think that im weird when i fond stuff that they think funny and sad so yea please please please update soon and i usaully dont reveiw untill i finish reading the story but this is an eception and my friend says PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE YOU ARE going to make me cry i want to knwo what happens to kagome and that and i wanna find out what the dragon anf tigger thing is or some thing like that and make sure that there are lemons and some very sad moments to get the other person here to cry please please i begg of you she scares me some times lol Bye Bye
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