| "The Chosen" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so waiting for when Inuyasha would learn how to transform into his demon-form.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 20:43 CST
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I love your story thus far! Finally someone who has decent grammar. You don't know how many good fan fics have been ruined by dumb mistakes! Please Update Often! By the way, who is the bad guy supposed to be, or is that information off limits to the readers as of yet?
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Title: heheh
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: March 08, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not much to say today i'm really tired but i'm still giving you a reivew! it's the most i can do! ^_^ well can't wate to read more keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: March 08, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic i just finished the latest chap. So keep up the good work and update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: March 07, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fanfic its really cool about kagome becoming a hanyou and all update soon^^
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:23 CST
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What the hell?!?! Good job on the lemons thought, don't know why I like them. *shrugs* Anyways, update, I wanna see Inu and Kag in their true/fae forms! Where did you get that fae stuff anyways? Lady Hikage of the Northwestern Lands
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Reviewed By: facsrne5 On: March 07, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where you are going with this story. The pink eyes are a nice touch and I think you should do a fan art of Kagome even though she didn't change much. What are you thinking of for her true form? And what about Shadow and Sesshomaru's relationship? Maybe you should let your chapters be longer so you can include more details. It's just a thought, although it wouldn't really matter because you get your chapters out so quickly. And one last thing… I forget… are you a girl or a guy? Just wondering… it doesn't really matter… I'm just curious.
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 20:13 CST
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you really know how to get someone into a story. great idea adding kouga and seeshomaru to the group with some more interesting characters. update soon
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I prefer pairing that come about through courting/dating. I am a big believer in romance and eoric romance, if that word makes sense.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 18:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love THe Story Plz Update It soon!!
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Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg!!! ^___^ now shadows the only one with out a mate i hope you change that soon *wink wink* hehehehehe well anywho yes i did enjoy it keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Hinote077 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so good.....plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love THe Story Plz Update It soon!!
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Title: lmao
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 02, 2005 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what is her sister doing?....hummmm...? well anyway keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting way to have Kagome wear the teddy. I can't wait to read about what Inuyasha looks like in his pure-demon form. Maybe you could have Inuyasha make-love to Kagome in his pure-demon form. Do you think you would be willing to draw a fanart of Kagome as a hanyou?
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