| "The Chosen" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: neko youki On: June 15, 2005 14:40 CDT
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I love your story.But I have to ask in the previus chapters you used moves that sond like moves I'v herd on digymon is that were you got them??
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I worded it wrong. When I said blood orgy I ment have all three girls perform their blood ceremony together with Inuyasha, and have Kagome present also. The thing about the threesome comment is that I don't like Naraku at all and I hate what Kikyo has become.
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Reviewed By: Lauri-Ann On: June 02, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this story! Please hurry and post a nother chapter! email me at Lauriben38@aol.com
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Reviewed By: nazi1414 On: May 28, 2005 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow, I just read this whole story in one sitting! I will go ahead and say that I was skeptical when I first started reading (I am not usually one to read Inu fics that go too far out of the small already existing Inu universe), anyway, I kept reading and I am glad that I did!! I love this story...your characters Shadow, Death Strike, Mikel, and the others are wonderful. I am very impressed with your story, I can't wait for the next chappy! If you are still interested in a beta reader, I would be honored if you would consider letting me help you out in that department. ^.^ If you would like to talk to me, my e-mail is gaki_oni_1414@hotmail.com, hope to hear from you!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 15:44 CDT
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I hope that you will eventually free Kohaku, Kagura, and Kanna from Naraku's control.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku, Kikyo, and Sindel!(Multiple sounds of unimaginable horror and disgust) I was wondering if you planned to have Shippou find a mate, well I mean not actual mating, but a female that he likes and one day will mate with her. I think Souten the female thunder demon is a good choice. I would like to read more about Kagome's time, and her three friends, Eri Yuka and Ayumi. This is only wishful thinking but maybe Eri Yuka and Ayumi could be hanyous as well, but not know it. Then maybe the three of them could maybe have an orgy-blood ceremony with Kagome and Inuyasha. I'm sick I know.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:11 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: KeishaBit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 14:30 CDT
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very interesting so far. this is the most original story ive read on this site so far. waiting for the update! :)
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Title: demon13
Reviewed By: demon13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on don't leave it there,more chaps PLEASE!
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Title: Mistake
Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 27, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I put down the wrong review sorry. So many stories to read so little time for proper reviews. Your gramars great and so is spelling. This means that aI gave someone else the review that was ment for you Sorry.
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 25, 2005 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a pretty fast writer and a pretty danm good one. Hope you update again real soon. Oh yeah you should think of checking some of your gramar its a bit off.
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Title: Me again.
Reviewed By: facsrne5 On: April 14, 2005 23:49 CDT
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I still have not read this chapter yet. I know I said don't hurt your bad 'cause that would be real bad, but... it's already 4/15! Where's chapter 13?! Agghh! I'm stressed out. I need some good reading. Pretty please!(with sugar on top).
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Title: Holy crap this is good!
Reviewed By: facsrne5 On: April 14, 2005 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, it's been so long since I have gotten to read. I'm trying so hard not to just read everything at once so if I really feel a need to read, there's still new chapters I haven't read. Please put out a new chapter soon so I can read chapter 12! It's so hard to wait but if I do finish, then I'll have no more to read :( . I am really enjoying your story. You are a great writer. And I like Shadow's background story. I think it's very powerful. Please write some more as soon as possible! :) Don't try too hard though and hurt your brain. That would be bad. Ouch.
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Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 10:11 CST
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i love this story hurry up and update
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 22, 2005 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work and update again soon ...but... one question are you only gonna focus on them now because this all started off 'staring' Kagome but now it's changed to her cousins' now i'm confuzed!?!?! update again soon pleasE?
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