| "The Chosen" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Title: ok...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 15, 2005 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ glad i could make you smile! ^_^ but i have one question who was she singing about will you ever tell us? well keep up the good work and udate again soon please?
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 19:21 CST
Comment/Review:
W00t I love Kag becomes/Is deamon fics.. Keep up the good work
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Title: Family Secrets; Startling Changes
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: InuYashsaLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 10, 2005 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes i'm not tired now so i can try to write more that was a great update keep up the good work and update again soon please? i really wanna read what's gonna happen next you've just got me so hooked!!! ^__^ and it's like a good addiction! like chocolate but non-edable! hehehehe
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Title: Story
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 23:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Story Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: March 09, 2005 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK i finally got it to work. YAY and chap nine is really cool because now i know what they look like in there true forms^^
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Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: March 09, 2005 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man i cant read the latest chap u just put on
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so waiting for when Inuyasha would learn how to transform into his demon-form.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story thus far! Finally someone who has decent grammar. You don't know how many good fan fics have been ruined by dumb mistakes! Please Update Often! By the way, who is the bad guy supposed to be, or is that information off limits to the readers as of yet?
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Title: heheh
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: March 08, 2005 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not much to say today i'm really tired but i'm still giving you a reivew! it's the most i can do! ^_^ well can't wate to read more keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: March 08, 2005 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic i just finished the latest chap. So keep up the good work and update soon^^
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Reviewed By: Xiantaru89 On: March 07, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fanfic its really cool about kagome becoming a hanyou and all update soon^^
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Reviewed By: SilverShadowKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
What the hell?!?! Good job on the lemons thought, don't know why I like them. *shrugs* Anyways, update, I wanna see Inu and Kag in their true/fae forms! Where did you get that fae stuff anyways? Lady Hikage of the Northwestern Lands
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Reviewed By: facsrne5 On: March 07, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where you are going with this story. The pink eyes are a nice touch and I think you should do a fan art of Kagome even though she didn't change much. What are you thinking of for her true form? And what about Shadow and Sesshomaru's relationship? Maybe you should let your chapters be longer so you can include more details. It's just a thought, although it wouldn't really matter because you get your chapters out so quickly. And one last thing… I forget… are you a girl or a guy? Just wondering… it doesn't really matter… I'm just curious.
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Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
you really know how to get someone into a story. great idea adding kouga and seeshomaru to the group with some more interesting characters. update soon
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