| "Fly Away Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 12:01 CDT
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Hi again! I liked the new chapter and I'm glad I'm not the only one afraid of spiders .Ewww anyway looking forward to the date and hoping for some action.
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Reviewed By: coolmorphs On: May 11, 2005 20:59 CDT
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"A/N: Another floppy died today. That particular piece of shit held my 26th chap for this fic." Have you heard of a **USB drive**? you could hold more than just one part/chapter on it & even more than one story at a time. Than you can write an arc!
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Reviewed By: spaceprincess18 On: May 10, 2005 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story, and I think it has great potential. Please keep that in mind when I say that your presentation would be greatly improved if you had someone check you grammar and spelling before you posted the chapters. If it's not to presumptuous of me, I wouldn't mind giving your chapters a once-over. e-mail me at spaceprincess18@yahoo.com if you are interested. Again, your plot line is excellent and this story really has potential.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 12:39 CDT
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Yay Wufei gets another chance.I loved Duo and I really loved the fact that the guy wet himself that was just great.Write more soon
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: May 08, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo was awesome! I love how he threatend Kordairo! I can't wait to see what happens next! -Till Then, auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: Foxy Grandpa [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 23:53 CDT
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Holy crap, is Duo insane? o_o; They're a little over-zelous for me, seriously n_n; Majorly soap-opera.. I mean, irl Kordiro would've given up a long time ago and just went on with his whoreh life-style O_. No one is ever so intent on ruining someone's life, unless they actually did something awful... But, whatever 'o' I still like your fanfic xD;
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Reviewed By: LIta Starwind (nsi) On: May 07, 2005 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! They got back together! And Duo's going after him! w00t! I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Wufei now be even more insecure around treize? I can't wait to find out! Update soon! And can you fix the chapter before the new one? It's all one big paragraph and it's extremely hard to read. Thanks! -Till then auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 18:22 CDT
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Loved the GG character.She sounds like a relative that Wufei would have.I hope that Trieze can smooth things over without making things worse.I cant wait to see what Duo and Heero do to that guy either.Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 14:47 CDT
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Why must Wufei suffer so?Cause it just makes a good story.Ahmmm ,sorry Wufei but angst looks good on ya.Well thats all the stupid stuff I'm writing for this review.Keep going cant wait to see how you fix this mess.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: May 02, 2005 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AW! POOR WUFEI! He thinks Treize cheated on him! I can't wait to find out how this is solved, and what will duo do when he finds out? Will he know that wufei was tricked? Update soon! Hehe yeah i need the luck -_-;;; - Till Then! auf wiedersehen
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Reviewed By: ? On: April 27, 2005 15:17 CDT
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(1) Ikieke: I don't know if I spelled it right, but it means bitch in Japanese. Why does Duo know this? Because he hangs out with Wu, that's why. But Wufei is Chinese.
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 12:38 CDT
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Really cute chapter.I really liked the part about the great cake war.Can't wait to find out how Fei's date goes so hurry and write more.
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Reviewed By: Lita Starwind (nsi) On: April 25, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha! This was really good! What's with all the wierd letters in the middle of it? Were they supposed to be there?Lol, well update soon! Good luck with your computer! Haha, no problem with the german spellings, I'm taking it as a class so I can't spell half of it anyways. Anways, -tschau! auf wiedersehen!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 14:07 CDT
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Arg, You cant stop there I want to know how Wufei is going to respond to Trieze.Please continue this soon.
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Reviewed By: Kitty Demon On: April 22, 2005 09:09 CDT
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keep it going please I got to finish it please. lil sesshomaru's girl.
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