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| "Teamwork 2" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: angelickagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 01:08 EDT
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i love this fic, all your naruto ones are amazing. PLEASE update *puppy eyes*
| Reviewed By: gossaem [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AWSOME! absolutly awsome. no if's ands or buts about it, your awsomeness is not up for debate. I think you for all the time you've put into this, and apoligise for all the idiots out there who trouble you with stupid things like begging for more, when it's obvious we all want more, but sensible people realize your HUMAN not the a god no matter how awsome you are, and thus we must await more awsomeness ^^. heh, thanks so much for writing this, i enjoy it more than any other story i've read.
| Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 12:56 EDT
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*Growls* Am I aloud to rip that Anoying person thingy downthere a new ass hole? Please say yes. *Glares at annoying person thingy, still growling* But...back to the review.............................................Poor Sasuke, actually having to ask people things. And though I understand their reluctance...the Village heads need their Asses kicked... *sigh* But what can you do?.. Do assume crrecly...did Sasuke just yoink one of Kakashi's Icha Icha Books?? X3 :3 Hmmm...that could result in some intereting things.. :3 X3 Loverly (extra) chapter...I await the next part of Naru-chan's chapter eagerly. Ja Ne, Zirra... PS: Don't let the mentally deficient get to ya...if it wasn't for them we wouldn't have anyone to poke fun at a lot of the time. ^..^
| Reviewed By: AsukaKureru-- On: March 18, 2007 23:41 EDT
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SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE SHUT UP I'M NOT A WRITING MACHINE. Do you think I can crap out 55 pages long chapters any time i feel like it? It takes time to come up with all the details, it takes time to make sure there are no plot holes, it takes LOTS of time to write it, and it takes almost as much to beta it enough to make it readable. Weirdly, i'm a lot more encouraged and in the mood to write more by people who tell me what they like about my story -- or even just that they like my story -- than by people who try to blackmail me with their spamming whining. Next time, just stop your review after the first sentence and it will work a lot better, kthnxbye. You can tell everyone that you just won Teamwork at least a week or two of delay on your own, congrats. :goes to work on other stuff:
| Reviewed By: AnnoyingPERSON72 On: March 18, 2007 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!! i don't usually read yaoi, but this is cool....you haven't updated, and I'm DYING here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HERE COMES THE ANNOYING-ness UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
| Title: Awesome Story
Reviewed By: Superstitious [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 05:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say for the first naruto fanfiction I've ever read I'm loving your story, I can't wait for the next chapters but I know good writing takes time- still *bounces* can't wait! I normally don't read yaoi fics but I am really enjoying them as a threesome, somehow I can't see it another way- they kind of need each other. Anyway awesome story and hopefully see a new update soon! CYA.
| Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 01:35 EST
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please update soon? *begs* the story is REALLY awesome and you rock at writing!
| Reviewed By: ^_\\ On: January 31, 2007 09:30 EST
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can't wait to know how's this plan Naruto thought!!! I'm also looking forward to more SasuNaru and NaruSaku... I mean, it feels a little like they're both chasing after Sakura and worrying about her... =/ I hope Sasuke stops being such an ass, and hints a little more that he cares about "the idiot". =D Pleeeeease update soon!!! [insert puppy face] XD
| Title: my review got cut in half!!! ;_;
Reviewed By: ^_\\ again... On: January 30, 2007 11:58 EST
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like... "Frowning, Sasuke gave Sakura's mother a look, ready to alienate her forever by giving her the death-glare from hell if she even looked like she was considering taking a jab he couldn't heal, but he could protect... but it seemed that Naruto and his wide-open heart didn't need his protection." awww!!! ^^ like when sasuke is angry because sakura's father is putting all the bad stuff on naruto's shoulders and when he's desperate because naruto is looking sad and he doesn't want to see that face... and it was also adorable sasuke asking " 'tachi" to check the monster in his closet (reminded me of me and my big brother! ^^")! so cute!!!! the part where sasuke thinks where his future father-in-law's the concerns should go also made me crack up!! and, finally, i have to say I *really* liked this part (though not more than the others mentioned): "And there were arms around him, strong arms, and a large, solid chest against his back, and he could breathe again, in big, gulping gasps, and soft hands slid behind his nape and pressed his face against a tender neck. He clung to her, hiding in her arms, knowing that the man at his back would keep on clinging to him." Sasuke sad like that and them both supporting him while he cried on Sakura's shoulder... really toucing. =] please, update soon!!!!! now I'm off to read naruto's plan (can't wait to see some 'sasuke supports naruto' fluff... ^^") and btw, your story rocks!!! \o/
| Title: my fav parts! \o/
Reviewed By: ^_\\ On: January 30, 2007 11:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i read "teamwork" at ff.net and decided to come read this and find out who's the parent! wow, what a dark chapter! sometimes i was getting really annoyed at sasuke for being so bitchy and a major ass sometimes... but, then again, there were so many times in this same chapter that were just so cute and sweet!!!
| Title: This ROCKS!!!
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 08:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story ROCKED!!! there is no other way to explain how great this is!! ^_^ i loved the 1st one too!! Keep up the great work!!
| Title: You are amazing
Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 08:01 EST
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this story i amazing it makes me laugh out loud and everything. i love everything about it you've done and amazing job with the characters maybe you should write for Naruto.....then us fangirls would all be very happy. i just want a bit more love between sasuke and naruto but i'm sure you get that all the time. please dont think i'm trying to be a flamer this is the best fic i've read ever.
| Title: please
Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2006 11:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story so freakin much.I have read all the other additions to the Teamwork saga like Teamwork the night and the others.It's amzing.Please update soon!It would make me and many others VERY,VERY,VERY happy.
| Reviewed By: Sldskdxx On: December 15, 2006 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-whines and paws at the story- I'm an update whore, ah hah that's a new one, so all I can say is I hope this story doesn't get lost in the shuffle. (; But hey, besides my update whoring, I'm also a Sasuke whore. Honestly. He breaks my heart, and endears me to him, more so with each Manga, Anime, and of course, Fanfic. I love that you have a Dying!Sasuke. My heart quivers, and my knees buckles inwardly at the thought. Out of all the episodes I've watched, The Broken Seal is still my favorite due to the... 'I just want to squish the needles out of Sasuke with my love' feeling to it. But I'm getting off of topic when all I really wanted to say was, I adore this story, adore hardly seems fitting, and love is just too common. What can I say? It's the bees knees?
| Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 11:11 EST
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Please tell me you are going to add more soon I love the plot/story line waiting for the next chapter, I'm hoping for a happy ending so please update soon !!!!:>
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