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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Havent heard from you in a while please update soon!! thanks:)
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 13:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait to see were you go with this! Its been very good so far keep it up :)!!!Update soon thanks.
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 19:14 EST
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so far so good can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I stopped following Naruto awhile ago, but I absolutely adore this story. I have no idea if the characters are behaving "in character" and I don't care. Great Job!
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Reviewed By: AnimeSiren On: August 30, 2006 21:19 EDT
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LOVED IT!!!! I've been totally waiting for an update!
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Title: SQUEEE
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 02:14 EDT
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I absolutely ADORE this story!! The different points of view in this are terrific and the little tid-bits of SasukexNaruto are brilliant. Keep up the good work!! :)
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Reviewed By: Sarah Gabrielle On: August 18, 2006 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am continually amazed by your ability to capture the characters and their dynamics while maintaining an integrity to your own vision and their canon identities. I love the fact that you can both break my heart in sympathy for the characters' dilemmas and trajedies and make me laugh with five minutes by your brilliant dialogue. I bow down in awe of this amazing new universe you are so very carefully creating. I hope that you continue to work on the story and look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: Red Kitsune Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 23:23 EDT
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I really love this! I just couldn't stop reading! Good job. And update soon, k?
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2006 16:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay im gonna review again. THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER. Im not really a fan of yaoi but i guess this is okay. I like how saskura and naruto made out like that. even though im a sakura/sasuke pairing fan forever, i like the naru/saku part.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: piett6000 On: August 04, 2006 09:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading Teamwork and this....I'm very impressed. This is a wonderfully engaging and engrossing story, and your characters really do intruigue a reader. You write a difficult set of relationships with plausibility and clarity, and it makes reading each chapter a pleasure. I'm very much hoping you continue to update this, as I am looking forward to seeing where this all ends up. Good job.
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Reviewed By: kiyomisa On: July 18, 2006 22:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As with your fic Equillibrium (I'm not sure I've forgiven you for leaving the GW fandom) I am enchanted with your skill at writing a believable threesome. A lot of fanfics out there have *poof* magic threesome, it's all good. But you consider all the bumps and obsticles. The characters are very well written, and I'm very happy with the way you handled Sakura. So many people tend to basterdize her because they want Naruto and Sasuke together, but she's a very real, very cool character and you've acknowledged this. I noticed from your comments that people were haranguing you about the yaoi and het and whatnot. Frankly, I have to say it's hard for me to imagine splitting those three up at all. If they were ever to get romantic, it would have to be with each other. Like Riku Sora and kairi in kingdom hearts, it would just be criminal to seperate them. So, in short, it's a joy to read as always, keep it up, I'm looking forward to what happens next ^-^
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Title: So. Friggin'. Close.
Reviewed By: Veggie's Boo On: July 13, 2006 19:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I adore this story. The entire idea is just GOOD. But you're KILLING me with the NaruSasu. Okay I understand that they aren't going to just start making out for no reason, but Sasuke was friggin' LAYING on him!!!!!!!! HE WAS WET!!!!!!!!!! Please I'm begging you I don't need much just SOME NaruSasu action. I don't particularly like Sakura but you've put me on the verge of tolerating here =). So PLEASE all I need is a little NaruSasu action. Veggie's Boo
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Shann On: June 21, 2006 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm asking you please please update, this is like the best storie, I have even read, I need more It's so good, I can't wait to see what happens, I really really love this storie. It's killing me, I need to read more............ Please update soon...................................................
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Title: seriously!
Reviewed By: kane shi megami not logged in On: June 20, 2006 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I thought the diff points of view would keep bothering me but instead I really like it! It give a different perspective....LOVED IT.... and this is the first story saskxsakuxnaru I've ever read that I LOVED. It's sad that you haven't updated in a few months. Ihope you are planning to continue it. I anxiously wait the next chapter... PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Nerea On: June 14, 2006 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first, I wasn't sure about the relationship in this fic. It seemed like an excuse for smut. However, you took the idea to a level I wouldn't have thought of. It's a great idea, and your writing is excellent. I can't wait to read more!
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