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| "Teamwork 2" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 ] | Title: Squeeeee!!! ^^
Reviewed By: Sasu/Naru Lover #? On: June 11, 2005 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!! *glomps* Yay!!! ^^ I absolutely LOVED this chapter -- the character/relationship development was wonderfully done!!! Oh, and it was funny, too... that's always a good thing, ne? ^___~ I can't wait to find out what happens next -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
| Reviewed By: danse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The blond guessed that Kakashi had his emotionally stunted hands full with Sasuke's emo self anyway. *dies laughing*
| Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 21:22 EDT
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Ah you have no clue how happy you made me that you updated it! I'd have to say my favorite line was about Kakashi being emotionally stunted and dealing with Sasuke's emo self (= It was hilairous and so true and I tried to hard not to bust out laughing at work. I love the bit about them teasing Sasuke, only to inadvertently hurt his feelings, possibly make him doubt his ability to be a good parent even more (that must really be working up a storm in his head, I really think Sasuke thinks too much). Well-written exchange with Iruka. I loved it all. And Sasuke's reaction to Naruto's offhandedly saying he loves him, really great (= Can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: McClown On: May 16, 2005 11:25 EDT
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Needs more Narutochan, and mabie some sakichan? So far you got ever thing covered but some girl on girl on girl action. Narutochan hanging off sasuke would problem freak out the village idoits even more.
| Title: Love it
Reviewed By: inuluvsu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it your a brilliant writer You make me want to read more and more no matter how long your chapters are. I normally never read sasuke and naruto pairings even with a three some but this, after the first chapter I was hooked for like kind of like a drug addiction but a fic addiction your so good. You the only writer who had done this to me. So Yeah love it major it's great work keep it up Blah Blah Blah (sorry that's my sign I'm tired of living) Update soon (great this sounds like I'm following a template) Ny way great, Love Yah! :) You are a (once again) great writer love yah! :) Good writers don't come around that often but your defianltely one of the best (Those to are my mind making last minute adgustments) Love yah! :)
| Reviewed By: Sasu/Naru Lover #? On: April 17, 2005 12:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAhhhhh!!! So sweet!!! ^^ I love it!!! I can't wait to see where you take this, and how (quickly *hint, hint* lol) you develop their relationship. (Actually, to be perfectly honest, I hope that it -doesn't- go too quickly... no point in ruining the story just to satisfy some reviewers, ne?) ^___~ Again, I love the characters/characterization, plot line, comedy/drama/sexiness/etc. *doesn't feel like writing all that stuff over again from last night's review of "Teamwork"* Yeah, if you haven't already read that review, you should...it will cause my ramblings to make a lot more sense, lol. (And just in case you're wondering -- not that you are -- I fell asleep last night and went to bed before I finished the second chapter -- no fault of yours, I assure you -- and just woke up a half-hour ago... and the fact that this is the first thing I did (after going to the bathroom, blowing my nose, and taking a few pills, that is... *mutters* ...stupid sickness......) is further proof of just how wonderful your fic is. Yup!!! ^___^ So keep up the good work, and update ASAP, kk? Ja ne!!!
| Reviewed By: dinkscythe (toolazytologin) On: April 14, 2005 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sasuke-sap--awkward, conflicted yet resolute--is the best kind of sap. The continuation of one of the best threesome stories I've ever read makes me happy already. I want to say something better, but there's this overwhelming voice inside of me that just keeps cooing "they're so cute! they're so sweet! they're so real and awkward and it's just so cute!" Sorry
| Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 02:28 EDT
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I'm so glad you updated (= Poor Sasuke and his lack of knowledge in the emotion area. Can't really blame him, considering his childhood and then the likelihood that he grew up on his own following it. Hm... perhaps it'll be twins, eh? One Sasuke's, one Naruto's... eh, I dunno if that actually works. So hilairous how Naruto can't paint, Sasuke knows it's the seals preventing him, and Sasuke refuses to say anything because he enjoys watching Naruto have issues. And for some reason, I doubt money would be an issue when it comes to choosing the new house, considering Sasuke's family line and whatnot. Although I imagine Naruto might have some issues with being entirely dependent upon Sasuke. Okay, rambling now, sorry! Anyway, great chapter, can't wait til the next update (=
| Title: Comment
Reviewed By: Hotogisu On: April 09, 2005 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more! Please? Ahaha, I don't normally write reviews but you have a real talent for writing, not to mention that I have been looking for this pairing for quite a while now. Here's to new chapters! ::kanpai!!::
| Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 14:46 EST
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OMG...I LOVED it...especially that bit w/Shikamaru Look at Shika and die...hehehe...that was great...though Sakura's mom is a pain in the ass...oh well, she'll have to get over it eventually, can't wait for the next chapter..THANKS:D
| Title: chapter
Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 00:43 EST
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Re-read the chapter. still loving it (= I loved Meru's comments, although I think Naruto would be obsessed with a kid as well. I would just hate to see Sasuke left out of the threesome. If it's Sasuke's with Naruto/Kyuubi's chakra, then everybody gets to be included in the fun. But i'm sure you've already decided whose the baby will be (= And I look forward to more SasuNaru interaction... or rather, Naru/Kyuubi/Sasu. Hm, that looks sort of wrong....
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 20:11 EST
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xxxxxD I nearly wet myself with glee when I saw 'Teamwork 2' on the list. and Im with Empyreal, hoping its sasuke's baby...I mean if It's Naruto's then thats fine but for some reason I think Sasuke would be way much sweeter and affectionate(though Naruto would be too) towards a baby, because the baby would be helping to save the clan? I dunno I'm ranting and trying to listen to my mommy whos calling down at me for something o_O;;;; anywho, love the story, and the way you write it, **awaits impatiently for more**
| Reviewed By: Empyreal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 22:00 EST
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ah I'm so excited you started on the sequel! I'm really hoping it's Sasuke's baby.. imagine what the Kyuubi's chakra could do to his natural abilities. But yeah, I'm Sasuke-biased (= I like how you write all of hte characters though. Defying the 2-dimensional stereotypes. Can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: Sivy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 17:15 EST
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As usual, good job! can't wait for another update for this fic, I love it lots
| Reviewed By: Nine Tailed Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 16:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story and I'm not usually a fan of SakuSasu but a little Naru makes it go down just right. Just so you know I find it kinda funny that you are so defensive of this coupling. Do people really heckle you for it? Wow. This is a really nice story but there is something that I truly don't understand...Is Sasuke more attracted to Naruto, Naruto to Sakura and Sakura to Sasuke or are they all attracted to each other equally? Yeah I know, stupid question but it does confuse me slightly. All in all you are a brilliant fanfic writer and the Teamwork series fits in with my favorite fanfiction right next to Gambare Shikamaru. If you're ever bored so you think that you could check out my stories, even if they are not to your taste? Most are on ff.net. Keep up the Good work!
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