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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: akane_neko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 10:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very impressed by not only your story, but also your style of writing. Not every story is well written. I dare hope that you will continue this story soon because I think it's worth the shot. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: carrotk On: January 12, 2006 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please oh please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update as soon as possible, i can't wait to read more of this wonderus story!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Misty_Rose On: January 10, 2006 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. I hope that you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 02:38 EST
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I just want to say: "Catching the end of their conversation, Sasuke looked at them over his shoulder, arching a sarcastic eyebrow. "You, a genius? You're the king of all things stupid." He turned away again, and Naruto winced comically for Sakura. It had been fun, but Sasuke hated to be teased and hated it even more when it was behind his back. But at least Sakura-chan hadn't hit him for badmouthing the bastard -- he'd made her laugh!-- so Naruto was very glad. He was about to reach Sasuke when Sakura nudged him, a weird glint in her eyes, and mouthed silently at him, "I think he just asked you to marry him." A flock of birds took off, scared away by Naruto's howls of laughter." Is one of the best scenes in Ch 3... heck, in the whole story... so far. the whole part where they talk about what Sauske really means,is great. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Edward_Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 16:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really do have to learn how to come up with good plotlines like this one...how do you do it?Ahh well I love your fic and do urge you to finish it =) although im sure you have your own reasons for not...and if its any consolation I deemed reading the latest chapter in this fic above doing my english essay today in school...Congratz =P
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Reviewed By: AnimeSiren On: November 06, 2005 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait until you update!
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Reviewed By: Lady moon On: October 31, 2005 18:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole teamwork story is very amusing, please update so we all can read more!
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: cloudseph [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 15:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome fic but ireally want you to finish is great!!!!!
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Reviewed By: amanda_02 On: October 02, 2005 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I've ever read. I absolutely *love* Team 7 as a threesome! And I think the way you are writing it is very realistic. Of course there would be lots of awkward moments! A relationship like that wouldn't just smoothly fall into place. Anyway, I can't wait to read more. I'm anxiously awaiting your next update!
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Title: Andartha
Reviewed By: Andartha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I discovered your Teamwork stories yesterday evening and I think they're fantastic. I absolutely adore this little threesome (which, with Kyuubi added to the mix, is sometimes more of a foursome *g*). I love having het and yaoi and LOTS of love all rolled into one story. It's a pretty rare find and I'm actually hopping around with glee here. Thank you for making my day (or rather night in this case)!
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Reviewed By: Zmyrra On: August 28, 2005 20:20 EDT
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Poor Sakura. Atleast her father has accepted the situation now. That should give her one less thing to worry about. Too bad she got more stressful news at the Hokage's office. It really can't be good for a pregnant woman to worry about parents, trying to find a balance in a threeway relationship, societal reproach and a baby that might kill her. Wee, next chapter is going to be about Sasuke! I've wondered how he really felt about the situation. It's alot of pressure for a young man to suddenly have a family when he has been alone for most of his life. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work! /Zmyrra
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Reviewed By: Queen of Diamonds [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Update soon.
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Title: I LOVE it!!!
Reviewed By: lizardlea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 18:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that story! You are a great writer, especially for someone who didn't learn english as a first language! I love the plot! I never could have thought of that! ^-^ please up-date soon!
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Title: Squeeeee!!! ^^
Reviewed By: Sasu/Naru Lover #? On: June 11, 2005 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated!!! *glomps* Yay!!! ^^ I absolutely LOVED this chapter -- the character/relationship development was wonderfully done!!! Oh, and it was funny, too... that's always a good thing, ne? ^___~ I can't wait to find out what happens next -- keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: danse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The blond guessed that Kakashi had his emotionally stunted hands full with Sasuke's emo self anyway. *dies laughing*
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