| "Cannot Be Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing. the descriptiveness was perfect. it was like I was there watching it all happen. the pain she felt as she saw the people she loved be killed was so intense. you wrote the battle scenes so well. i could see naraku's evil smiles and ugh. i hate him. i can only hope that her self sacrifice will be enough to save inu. about everyone/everything else, i don't know what you have planned, but you always deliver. this chap was depressing and violent, however, i still enjoyed it immensely. it had to happen. i also liked the whole thing with kagome and the imps from hell. it reminded me of sess and how he can, well could, swipe them with his sword to heal. very nice. i hope to see what happens next soon. i'm hooked as always.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 18:08 EST
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I love this story, it's so well thought out and the descriptions and details, are amazing! Your an amazing writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter1 Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh. how can i stand it?! i feel inuyasha's pain way too vivdly. and kagome's as well. i hope it's not their last kiss. naraku cannot win. : ( your descriptiveness is incredibly realistic. i have a special place in my heart for this fic. i am eager to see what happens in the next chap like you wouldn't believe! i hope life is treating you well and would like to wish you a happy new year... even tho i'm a bit late. ^.^ thanks for the update.
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Tcutie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 00:17 EST
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Please make more chapters!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 14:33 EST
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WOW, that's a spectacular story! Very original and interesting. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 15:13 EST
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This story is awesome!!!! Im soooo impressed with ur creaticity....and u dont even have that many spelling mistakes!!!:D:D:D U have NO idea how much that annoys me.....bad spelling....Keep Writing and Write Fast/Alot.............Cheers
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic!! I'm glad I found it. This story is amazing and so rich in description. I just love that. I can't wait for Kagome and Inuyasha to have some time together without interruptions. This cliff was very evil, I can't wait to read next chapter. So you better post it soon eh! You are very talented, I even cried in a chapter..
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea! how wonderful to see that you have updated! love, of course. the purest thing. awww. all of the sparring was frikkin' great. you're so good at writing those scenes! i get so into this fic it is sad. ^_^ i wonder what sessh will have to say. will naraku be making an appearance in the near future? please update soon now that you have teased me with a new chap. *gets on knees and begs* oh man, how i love those miroku and sango moments! will he ever learn? ; )
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so inu just brings out the best in kag, huh. especially her powers. does that mean if something bad happens to inu, then her powers might be thwarted or taken away? hmmm. i luv this fic. wish i could have r/r earlier, but EVERYTHING has gotten in the way. sorry. i am so looking forward to a new chap. p.s. i miss seeing new posts for SFTS. i love that story too.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: August 12, 2005 02:31 EDT
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Awwww. Such a good chapter, I was cracking up during the beginning, very very funny. And you were, again, very clear on explaining things; we all had it backwards...interesting. I particularly liked Miroku in this chapter, he's just so...grabby *snerk*. I await your next update!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 22:31 EDT
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Well, that was a lot to digest in one go. I think I may reread it later. Well, it's good that Kagome and Inuyasha are still on speaking terms. I think the next chapter and the duo's response to the love comment.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am greatly enjoying this piece of fiction. You have done a good job of adding the elements of the original IY story to a new one of your own. It is intrigueing and makes me want to read more. One problem though. I think if you have anyone else interrupt IY and Kag I won't be able to read any more of your fiction. Why? Because my family will have officially sent me to the funny-farm. Nothing like a grown woman screaming at the computer,stomping into the kitchen, cursing to make InuYasha blush, and then stomping back to the computer to read the next chapter. But really. Really good fic. I look forward to reading more of it. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: inu-kag15(nsi) On: August 07, 2005 02:08 EDT
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Hi, love the story so far, but I have a question...is it Kirara or Kilala. I know this isn't specific to your story and I'm sorry, but I need to know, LoL. You don't have to answer...
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Reviewed By: Allis0n On: July 31, 2005 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story. its plot is so complicated, yet so simple, and i love how it all comes together. keep being your brilliant self
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Reviewed By: rav3n On: July 31, 2005 01:17 EDT
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interesting story. hope to see another chapter from you soon!
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