| "Cannot Be Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:20 EDT
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i just started reading this fic. I love the thought of sess being kags dad!! chap 4 made me CRY!!!! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 18:21 EST
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Chapter 12: This is a cumulative review... kinda, since I am too lazy to review every single chapter. I was wondering about a few things. For example: Why does she have to choose between Sesshomarou and Inuyasha? Is there only one that is good? I really like how Kikyou is a 'good guy.' I always saw her as deluded, somehow. Like she believed what she did was right, even though it wasn't really. One thing I do not understand - Why is Midoriko such a "bad guy?" I guess I'll find out later...
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 04:16 EST
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Okay... so I stayed up til 3 am reading your story. It was fantastic! SO wonderful :o) I was freaking out thinking that you killed of Kagome. *whew* anyways, great job :o) I can't wait for the updates on your other fics!
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Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: November 29, 2006 22:39 EST
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OMGWTFBBQ! My eyes are all watery. That was SO good. I just spent my whole shift reading this one! Loved it.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 23, 2006 04:00 EDT
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okay now that i've reread this and spent the better part of an hour bawling i fear when you say a chapter coming up is angsty. i think it was safer for my sanity to discover this fic after it was complete. i don't think my sanity would have survived!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Brittani On: September 22, 2006 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you a 20 but seeing as how it wont let me... i guess that you get a 10. I have never read something that made me cry,laugh,get angry,and become closer to the characters. I adore this story so much that i spent 2 days locked up in my room reading over and over. I just thought I would let you know how much your stories have made me come to love InuYasha even more. Thank you again, Brittani
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 21:05 EDT
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awwwwwww so sweet...a lil deep and confuzing for me but oh well...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: lola bear On: June 25, 2006 20:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was honestly that best written story i have ever read in my life, and i read a lot. Everything was amazing, the plot, the story line, just even the way you worded things. When i was reading the story, i almost felt like i was one of the characters in the story, i could feel their emotions and see what they saw. Man, i dont think i have every cried, laughed, and felt so much love well reading a story before. For a while i thought that you were going to give the story a very sad ending, but in the end you fixed everything and it all turned out perfect. You honestly have a gift for writting. I cant believe how many times i skipped this story becuase it didnt have many reviews, how stupid i was lol. But anyways great job and keep up the amazing work. Bye
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Charlianneaeaea On: April 18, 2006 18:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Crap, That was one of the best fucs I ever read, youv mad skills
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Reviewed By: L On: April 09, 2006 18:30 EDT
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That was it? Hehe. Alright, you confused the hell out of me more than once in this story. But it was still a good story. If you do go back and revise, I would shorten those long-winded and confusing speeches at inappropriate times, like when they're in the middle of a battle, and clarify a bit when you're explaining about the Shikon. I can understand a celestial being talking in half-riddles cuz it's like secretive and mystical and stuff, but Sesshomaru explaining it and me still being confused made me feel retarded. And I'm not stupid. I've said confused like three times, well now four, in this short review. I guess I could replace a few with 'befuddled' or 'discombabulated' or something, but I'm too lazy. And I don't mean to discourage you form writing, because you really have good ideas and thoughts and stuff, it's just (and I totally understand this) when you have something figured out in your head and you can't put it into words and then it comes out all distorted so that you can hardly even recognize it and then you end up babbling (much like I'm doing now). It happens to all of us. This review has turned out so wrong. I don't blame you if you never want to read my stories or do and then leave a reallly mean review on it like 'you tell me all this crap and then you write that stinking pile?' Yeah. That would suck. Anyway, I'm gonna shut up now. You are a very creative writer and I'm still waiting for more Search for the Shikon which was what introduced me to Cannot Be Broken. Update that soon please? Sorry if this came out the wrong way and I made you mad or sad cuz I didn't mean to. Maybe I shouldn't even send this... No, I've just spent five minutes writing it, it's getting sent. I'll just go argue with myself for a little longer by myself. Yeah. See ya.
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Reviewed By: gentle_whispers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 21:39 EDT
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i spent all day yesterday reading this story! awesome! and i just LOVE the epilogue. love love love!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a beautiful story. reading this was such a pleasure! at times i did feel a bit lost, but coincidentally, one of the characters would be lost as well and i'd get a simpler explanation through that. i really got into this fic and was always excited to see updates. i'm so shocked when you say this is the first thing you've written. it's done with such attention to detail and the storyline is completely original. this will definitely be one of my all time fave fics. thanks again for writing it and i hope to see more from SFTS soon. that one seems like so much fun. i can't wait. take care!
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Reviewed By: koniko chan On: March 08, 2006 23:05 EST
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AWWWWWWWWWWW the ending was soooo cute! Very nice story. I love how you portrayed kagomes sprit throughout the story it was very nice to see. oh and the first meeting between kag and Inu has to be my favorite part of the story. ^^ anyways thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 00:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yeah. i have finally, somewhat, figured it out. you are a genius. did you know that? i am so ready for the next chap, i cannot contain myself. what will inu do? will he sacrifice himself for her. will kagome merge with naraku?? please update when you can. i seriously can't wait. *hugs your magnificent mind*
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Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 03:17 EST
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I just choked on my soda. WHAT?!!Kagome sacrificed herself and you just end it there? You need to hurry up. Did Sesshy get killed, because he was about to be and then you cut away. Cause he has the tesaiga and that can bring back all his peeps including Kagome. But if she comes back, will she still be the shikon? Oh, wait. Tensaiga can only bring back people. And most of his army was demons. Never mind. But he can still bring back Kagome. If he's still alive. You know what? Just update and take all the creative liberties you want with it, cause I want a happy ending and I don't care about the logistics.
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