| "Cannot Be Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 10, 2005 06:28 EDT
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Aw, that was sad! Inuyasha can't hate her...That would totally kill all the romance ;) . Anyway, I liked this chapter, I was a bit confused in the beginning, but it became more clear as I went along. Great job on explaining it so readers could understand it without it seeming dumbed-down (that can be hard), but you did it magnificently. Kudo on a job well done, I look forward to more chapters!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 00:52 EDT
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oh no. i know... hope this will be a happily ever after, but man is inu an assh*le. i figure he feels pretty used about now and probably wants to hurt something, but kag was also a pawn, right? i feel for them both, but more for kag. i mean, feeling betrayed by her own father and finding out your powers that you didn't even know you had killed people. wow. there were alot of secrets revealed and questions answered in this chapter and i thoroughly enjoyed it! when you have a chance, please write more. !)
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Reviewed By: Sango's boomerang On: July 10, 2005 00:04 EDT
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Oh could someone please smack some sense into Inuyasha!! Oh just let him be smacked repeatedly! Poor Kagome
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Reviewed By: EAP On: July 08, 2005 04:57 EDT
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Wow, that was intense! Realy well done, I loved Inuyasha's language, very funny. And new info about Kagome's powers...The whole chapter was very good, I really enjoyed it. I cant wait to read more, I hope you get a chance to write with the little one around (good luck with that, by the way!).
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Reviewed By: mai-sama On: July 08, 2005 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN HIM!! DAMN HIM TO HELL!! THE BLOODY BASTARD!! I CANT BELEIVE HE CALLED KAGOME A FREAK!!! AHHHHHH!!! PLEASE PLEASE I MUST KNOW MORE!!! AHHHHHH!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE REALLY REALLY REALLY SOON!! AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 02:13 EDT
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gah! who is she then, midoriko? who? WHAT? that kikyo was sounding so ominous. poor kag. i hope you update and tell me soon, cuz if i wasn't lost earlier with the rosary, then i am now for sure. @_@ can't wait to get some answers. i dunno, but i have my theories. i'm probably wrong, tho. bye 'till next time.
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Reviewed By: fairiewhirl On: July 08, 2005 01:46 EDT
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Damn Inuyasha! How could he call Kagome a freak! The poor girl, Ihope she punishes him for saying that.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2005 07:19 EDT
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I love this story. I just found it, and stayed up all night reading. Its really beautifully written. Though, I'm a little confused by this light, and their relationship...but I imagine Sesshomaru will explain some stuff, ne? And the rosary. That was a little odd. I love it, and look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaah. you make it so easy to hate naraku! (btw, that's a compliment) pretty good cliffy too. i'm excited to find out what sess has to say to our fav. couple. well, c-ya at the next update.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 30, 2005 04:42 EDT
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I'm so happy you updated! And we get 2 chapters too! Yippee! I really liked both chapters, the action you wrote was really good, very compelling. And the heart-to-heart was really sweet, great job on that. I cannot wait to see what happens with Sesshomaru, so please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: spooks On: June 29, 2005 00:39 EDT
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I sense the "sit" spell coming up. I wonder how it will be activited.
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: June 26, 2005 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just had to let you know--I sat and read the whole fic last night, without pause--it was that good!! I'm also very happy to see that you're an author that likes to update--frequently ^_^ The story is well-written, the characters are developed, and the plot is great!! --not to mention the fanstastically, sizzling effect Inu and Kag have on each other!! I'm hooked!! Thanks for a great read ~ME
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 24, 2005 03:44 EDT
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That was SO good! I really like the "I knew it was you, Inuyasha" moment, it was relly well done. And the kissing, you alway blow me away with those scenes, you really rock at that. And this was a quick update too, that was much appriciated! As alwats, I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Reviewed By: EAP On: June 23, 2005 04:29 EDT
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Yay yay yay! So happy to see you updated, I hate that writers block too...And a cliffy! Lucky us. It was a very well done cliffy, at least. I liked the whole chapter, and Inuyasha being tender to Kagome and Saving her, then her saving him back....*sigh* *loffs you* I hope you get the next chapter up soon, and have no more writers block!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo funny..."in japanese, houshi." i wuz rollin'. wow, you did such a good job on the water rescue scene.it seriously was realistic. you know i love this story, so please update when you have the time. sorry 'bout the writers block. it happens to the best of us. but, luckily that's over for now, ne? bye 'till next time.
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