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Reviewed By: Sacralogos On: August 13, 2011 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I love your writings. I couldnt put it down. I found my self wonderimg what was going to happen in the next chapter. All of your writing are so good I just want to keep.rereadin them.over and over. Thanks so much |
Reviewed By: HunterHellish On: June 12, 2011 21:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!! So Emotional and sad yet touching and sweet. I have such a habit of relating fanfics to songs and I really feel this story goes well with Traitors by The May Fourth Massacre which also happens to be my friends band hehehe. Anyway check that song out and once again this is a great fic! |
Reviewed By: K On: August 01, 2010 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I utterly love this story to pieces. I LOVE your characterizations of Kouga and Inuyasha and the addition of the characters that make up Kouga's family. I love the plot that this story follows and I can't wait to finish reading it! However... No offense to your beta.... Mollie missed a LOT of obvious misspellings, extra/unnecessary words, and kind of awkward grammar mistakes. I'm kinda busy right now, but I can re-beta this for you, if you even want to bother with it. My email is purplemoon17@gmail.com if you think you'd like me to edit the story again for you. :)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 13:45 EDT
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Ah reading it again, its amazing as ever. Before I went to sleep i thought, "Wow...i am really in the mood for Lost Hopes"...so i just finished it in 2 days...so good so good...cant wait to read your other works...might get started now XD
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Reviewed By: The Black Flame Pheonix On: April 11, 2008 14:19 EDT
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i really loved this i started to read it on fanfiction but liked this one better cause it was more detailed it took me three days to read it completely but it was perfect.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 16:55 EST
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this was a good story, i would love to know have an epilouge so we can find out what happens next. i assume that kagome will go back to her own world, but what will happen with miroku, sango, and shippo? will shippo end up staying with the wolves? please write more.
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Reviewed By: Sasha-sushi On: September 17, 2007 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because i am a college student it took me quite a while to read this whole fiction. but it was worth every miniute.
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Title: I'm content
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 14:13 EDT
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Yay! That ending was better than I imagined, perfect and beautiful in every way, if there is an epilogue I look forward to it. If not well I just want to restate how much I have enjoyed this story and also add that I will be looking out for other great pieces from you in the future. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 00:40 EDT
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I love this story please write more like this! Puppy eyes!!!
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Title: Chapt. 35
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL...Kouga's brains turning to mush in the middle of his pompous rant at Inuyasha when he realizes his mate is ready to birth any second! The kids are so cute!! And I like their names; I can just imagine Nozomi and Itsuki ganging up on Hiroshi when he tries to pull rank on them because he's the eldest. I can't believe it's the end of the story already...it would be great if you could add an epilog. puppy eyes...please? Thanks for a great story!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 22:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME story it was awsome. I love the names of the pups.
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Reviewed By: wolfluv On: July 29, 2007 11:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read this story countless times and i wait with baited breath for the next chapters! I was so releaved when i saw your most recent chapter that was last month! most don't finish what they start and i know how hard it is but please keep trying your best because that is what i have seen in your work ten fold! I have also read this story on two other sites! and I still love it so! as for any tips on what you might want to write for the next chapter i think Sango punishment should be to work for Kouga's Mom and Miroku shoud work with grandma because he is a monk and maybe even though he my not have the wind tunnel any more he did suck up a lot of demons where did they go? maybe grandma see's them and realies he could use those powers under guidence? they were just a few thoughts. Oh and Sango should work for mom because she does know demon anatomy! maybe other lands they share treaty's with need her healing remidiy's and Sango could help her figure out the best way to do this?
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Title: Down with Kagome
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:26 EDT
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Nice, really nice, yes throwing Kagome in a pile of dung is quite fitting indeed, snorts, I look forward to more. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I am so happy that u updated...it has been so long but i havent forgotten...so please update soon I am so happy *sniff* thanks it was wonderful as every previous chapter and good luck to inuyasha on the delivery should be interesting with his attitude...
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Reviewed By: Frozen_mask On: June 22, 2007 04:30 EDT
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The beginning I loved. this in the beginning would have been my favorite I liked the concept and how you wrote it. I read many kouga inuyasha mating ones and yours my favorite I disagree with the bashing though. I'm telling you I hate kagome but this made me feel sorry for her. I found it irritating that kagome should be punished so bad when kouga gets off scott free when he almost did the same crime. If she just stayed in her worldand never came back... The part of having one person to have sex part didn't make sence when it was in the beginning the sister didn't mind that kouga was just having sex which was normal with concent and he marked him as omega so he could make kagome his alpha. Sorry if this doesn't make sence or I irritate you but I really liked your fic and when I really like something I think about it a lot. glad I came here though loved the sex that was taked out of in ff.net
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