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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: Lil_Kag On: August 15, 2005 20:07 EDT
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It's so sad. I like how you're carring the story on. Its different from the Dog and the Wolf, which i enjoyed too. Inu depress its just so Kawaii. I feel bad for him. Kouga its such an asshole but he's confused, that's good, that'll teach him not to hurt such a fine creature like Inu. Kagome is kinda bitchy, i like it, she needs to limit herslef with the 'SITS', and she's not even worry about inu's health, bitchy bitchy. I totally love sango, her attittud is correct and friendly,but i'm kinda worried bout how Miroku will react.
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Reviewed By: InuYasha's Arm Candy On: August 10, 2005 05:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god i think im actually going to cry. im sorry, but inuyasha's stronger than that. he just is. i dont cry, i haven't shed a tear in 6 years. i've had plenty of reasons to, but i haven't and i actually think im going to cry. excuse me*sniff* sry. but you're a really good author even if you turn inuyasha into a purring little whelp*sniff*inuyasha's stronger than that.
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Reviewed By: u r a loser On: July 27, 2005 18:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: KJ On: July 24, 2005 19:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey It's me KawaiiJade....I loved the update and can't wait for the next update...hehehe I love Kouga and Inu pairings...so I'm obsessed with ur stories...it's a compliment...lol Ja'ne until next time
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 22:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh i loved it loved it...can't wait for more....did u miss me? LOL
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Reviewed By: lil2 On: July 03, 2005 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you're continuing this story. Excellent writing skills make this even more a pleasure to read. I'm totally drawn into it!
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Reviewed By: moongoddess101 On: July 03, 2005 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i llllllllloovveeeeeeeeeee it i hope u write more.
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Reviewed By: faelaine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 15:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
aww, poor inu yasha seemed sad about that. I'm definately interested in seeing where you take this story. Kag seems kinda bitchy here, I'm not complaining at all, she does come across that way quite often. Anyways, cant wait to read more!
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