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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Me On: June 21, 2007 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the Best stories I've ever read! You Must Keep Writing! Bring on the K9 Babies!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!! Inu was about to fuck her up something bad man. Gotta love I hope she get more of that she needs a ass kicking. Update when ya can k
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Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 11:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. In my opinion Kagome is acting a little OCC, but overall very well done! My congratulations to you and I hope Inuyasha and Kouga have a long, happy life together. Oh, one more thing, when is the next lemony goodness?
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: kereiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have had reviews by me on ff.net as the user "tandeki" ^_^ So you already know i totally adore your fics, i just felt like reviewing here too, lol. Love it heaps, keep up the great works ^_~ OH! and something i forgot to say on my other review, lol, is that im glad of the punishment you gave kagome XD heheh
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Title: Great Job
Reviewed By: LumiWolf On: May 08, 2007 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great story. Ihad just started reading this on Saturday, and I must say this was the best fanfic that I've ever read. I even cried when Inu lost the child the first time. You kept me in suspense and had me wanting to read more and more. I really appreciate what you've done, and I hope that you make more stories worth other people's while. Or even become a writer or something. I mean seriously, it was a great story. Anywho, Ja ne.
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Title: Dissapointed? Nope
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 23:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm not disappointed, I'm actually quite pleased with your results after 14 times. Kagome's punishment is quite fitting indeed, though death would have put an even bigger smile on my face but hey, she's get her just desserts one way or another and then it will be a happy day. On another note, I know it's probably still a ways away but I really want Kouga and Inuyasha's pups to be born already. sighs, ah well good things come to those who wait. And I can't wait for more. Cheers!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Don't end your story Last Hopes. Inuyasha didn't have his pups.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished reading the entire story and I needed to say that you are one of the greatest fanfiction writers I have ever seen. Never in my wildest dreams would I have imagined Inu-Yasha and Kouga in a situation like this (ok maybe in my wildest dreams...)The point is, you have a way of making this story even better then it is. I like how you were able to slightly alter the personalities of several of the characters so that they fit into this story, but not enough to really change who they are. (Personally I do think Kagome is a bitch) I really like the emotions you put the characters through and of course all of your own characters you placed in to make things better. Everyone and everything seems to really support the plot you have going. The most recent chapter I think is my favorite, although the earlier chapters really touched me emotionally. Don't quit writing this story, I sooo want to see two little furry pups of doom (because any child of Kouga or Inu-Yasha would mean doom on the world) running around. Also, I want to see Kagome become humble! Over all rating: Way higher then a ten my dear. This is probably one of the best Kouga/Inu-Yasha fan fictions ever
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
YES!!! KaHOme is finally getting what she deserves i hope she is alone 4 the rest of he life and never gets to see inuyasha again!!! update soon
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Title: Chapt. 33
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 20:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow - 14 rewrites! I'm glad you didn't give up. A lot of nice things going on; the cubs visit to Inuyasha-sensi; Inu and his sister-in-law giving Katashi a couple of lumps for being a jerk; Keiko lets Kouga know that Inuyasha will have more than one pup (and then dosen't say how many!)and punishment is dealt to Kagome. Yeah, being stuck as a slave, endlessly cleaning every thing in sight and living off of table scraps 'cause she won't have time to find roots and berries to eat seems about right...lol And she could still be trouble; she could purify Inuyasha if she got a hold of him. The thing that I miss are the 'change of action' strings...the O O O O O O or * * * * * to show that some thing else is being talked about that you used earlier. How much longer before the pups are born? Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for another fun chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow it has been while since the last chapter...I think I will have to reread...but thats ok cause I like it so much...please update some more though...need mroe angst yay
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Reviewed By: DBZVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. The plot is realistic and well-thought out. I hope that you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: lostsun21 On: February 26, 2007 21:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story but I keep noticing A LOT of typos. You should re-read some of your chapters (I'm on chapter 13) to make sure you find and fix a lot of them.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: shadowfantisy On: February 20, 2007 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really an awsome fic and I hope you're going to continue it, the plot is realy original and I realy love reading it. the writing style caught me a little off gaurd but ut's nice and your spellings better than that of some others. I give you full props on this fic and I'a so glad what you did w/Kagome*happy dance* she is evil. I don't like her much, but please continue this soon! thnx and major props to u and your beta you guys rock.
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