| "Lost Hopes" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: acr On: July 18, 2006 00:33 EDT
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a bit pointless...I'm ready to see what Kagome and the others are up too.
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Reviewed By: TRESS On: July 17, 2006 01:18 EDT
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Well it took me all day but I finally caught up to this here story and I absolutely adore the way you right Inuyasha and Kouga. Oh and I love your Oc's aswell (especially that loony grandmother. she's an absolute scream,lol anyways sorry for not signing in but I was too lazy. cheers!
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Title: Chap. 27, Baby Shower
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup! I love happy moments! Thank you!! LOL Kaiya is so cute with her 'Excuse me, hormones.' comment. And it looks like Kouga, ever charming in his way, catches on fast. He very hastily reassures his sister that she is radiant looking. Of course she isn't 'fat' yet either. One can only imagine what Inuyasha will be like. Maybe Katashi and Kouga will be spending some time hiding out from their hormonal driven mates. I can just imagine in now Hmmm, it seems that the more things change, the more they stay the same. Inuyasha has moved from a human community that was prejudiced against him because of his heritage and he is still getting some of the same treatment from part of his new clan. Those silly 'wise elders' (and others for sure) still don't accept him fully. Well, lol, that will leave lots of room for more evil in this story! I mean really, that's what makes the love and happy moments really stand out. And we can't forget the evil Kagome! Where is she and what has she been up to? And Sesshomaru, will he be making his presence known again? Looking forward to your next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 17:41 EDT
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awee inu-baby is pregnant again!! its about time yea kids! lol kouga can be so... KOUGA! lol only one word to desribe kouga the great wat a dumb stupid arrogant sexy wolf lol! update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyashawifey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 12:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi i have read all your fanfics and i love this one so can u please come out with a new chapter i want to know what happened to inuyasha
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Title: Chapt. 26 Mating Season
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Poor Kai! Mi-chan is almost grown up enough and he knows it! Obviously he's been given the wolf's version of the 'birds and bees' speech and is really embarrassed by Mi-chan's comments. He is well aware of what mating season is all about. Seeing this through the eyes of Mi-chan and watching Kai squirm is just priceless!! Next we get to listen in on Kaiya talking with her mother; she's displaying a marked change in temperament; she is over-reacting; a tad jealous possibly because dear Kouga is still having 'fun' and then we find out that she even made her poor mate risk his life and go pound on Kouga's door! LOL Plus, she is just joyfully excited about her pregnancy. Thank goodness that mom has 'been there' and 'done most of that'. She is the calm in the sea of emotions around her. And then we arrive at Kouga and Inuyasha's den. This was a wonderful little study on self-expectations and the expectations of others. Poor Inuyasha, he really wants to have a pup and now has slipped back into despair and self-doubt again. And once again, Kouga was just awful. In the heat of the moment he has seriously hurt Inuyasha both mentally and physically. Bad, bad Kouga!! All in all, this was a great chapter I think. It was fast paced and I liked the way you showed the progression of reactions and emotions starting with the innocent confusion of Mi-chan,then Kaiya's wildly changing moods and finally the explosive melt-down of Kouga and Inuyasha. And all of it about mating season. So much going on in this chapter!! Just great! Bibi
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Reviewed By: inuyashawifey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fan fics i ever read i hope you write more because i want to find out how this story ends and you rock
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Reviewed By: acr On: June 05, 2006 23:36 EDT
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This chapter was a bit slow. Too much time with the OCs.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 22:51 EDT
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omg!! awe how could kouga say that meanie pants poor inu. omg im like gonna cry u scared me when u siad he was dead i thought u meant inu i was like omg!! lol anyway update soon
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Reviewed By: Moreta On: May 28, 2006 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, my english is not that good (i speak french) so i hope you will forgive me in advance for my mistakes. I have discoved your fanfic just a few weeks ago. I am not a big yaoi fan (my best friend actualy beg me to read your story) but i must say that i have enjoy it. I've laugh a lot, specialy the part when Inuyasha meets Kouga's gramma. It was also sad and it give a good thinking about self-estime. Especialy the way that we speak and act around people. i've loved it and I've read all 25 chapiters in one afternoon (no joke). So, where is chapter 26 ? Please !!!
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Reviewed By: MsKittyKyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 10:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Chrys On: May 23, 2006 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gratz on the marriage!! Cant wait to see whats in store, Im curious to know if your going to bring Kagome and the others back into the story and how the play between them and the couple will work out. Anyway Im looking forward to it, and keep up the great work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 16:36 EDT
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beautiful story well written and captivating, cannot wait for your future updates. =)
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Reviewed By: Rii-chan On: May 13, 2006 13:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I hope you add anouther chapter soon kayz? I think your Ideas are really well thought out and original, but one thing that has been bothering me is that it's not youki, it's youkai.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 17:42 EDT
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i like it alot cnt wait till next chappie update soon
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