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Title: jamc79
Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 11:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this fanfic. I like that although InuYasha was OOC it was explained well as to why he didn't act the same. Having one of the first things Kagome says being 'SIT BOY' when finally seeing InuYasha again in Ch.30 is just what I imagined she would do. I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: SoarMore_FlyHigher [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 15:36 EDT
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EEE! Good story! A bit over done, with the Inu Yasha and the M-preg, but still, it's a good story. I hope you continue and that your new beta wont disappear on ya.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 19:06 EDT
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finally that bitch got what was commign damn i hate her she ruins the whole fuckin show in general anyway lol update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 14:36 EDT
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THAT BITCH I HAAATE HER KILLL HERR! OMG I CRYING WRITE NOW SHES SUCH A BITCH trying to calm down right now but oomg for real i HATE KAGOME N I HOPE KOUGA GETS HER DUMB HOE
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Title: Chapt. 29
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 22:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the flashbacks - Inuyasha hiding in a tree, grumping and growling constantly and giving everyone a hard time. And the flashback with the meal: poor Kaiya! She's got morning sickness and Inuyasha is showing no empathy whatsoever. LOL He, oh so innocently, tells her that the food is wonderful and she should try some. Pretty impressive that Inuyasha and Kouga managed to hide his monthly transformation from Keiko. Oh that evil, evil, cliffy!! The wicked miko of the modern era shows up! She's not too bright - picking on Inuyasha in the middle of practically the whole wolf clan. If Kouga had only told Inuyasha what was going on instead of yelling at him to stay put. Some major self-tail pulling is coming up on Kouga's part! Will Inuyasha be able to save himself and his cub? Will Hotaru be there in time? Or, will Kouga save his mate? Run Kouga! Run!!
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Title: Chapy. 28
Reviewed By: Bibi11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 22:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At last, Inuyasha and Kouga have some really great quality time together! But not for long - LOL - 'cause here come the relatives!! It's a good thing they had a chance to work out some major issues for themselves before the family arrived. The whole chapter was nicely done. Both of them have matured. Kouga seems a little more supportive and understanding but he still is somewhat of a controller. But then if he wasn't that way, he wouldn't be the Kouga we have come to know. Then where would the story line be!
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Reviewed By: SoarMore_FlyHigher [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 19:48 EDT
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An awesome story, I say. It's not the best though. I don't mind how people need to get her out of the way when making an InuKouga pairing, but why make her such a bitch? I mean, OOC is sometimes nice, but Kagome is way more understanding. You're writing is great, the organization and grammar is awesome and I think you are a great author. I just can't say it's the best 'cause it's not, at least to me. Don't take this hard, it is awesome, and I will continue to read it, I just can't bring my self to say this is one of the coolest InuKou stories. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: acr On: August 11, 2006 01:05 EDT
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Glad things are picking up. the fluffiness and OCs were getting tiresome.
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh! That has to be the worst Cliffy EVER!!! AAAAAHHH!!!! Poor Inuyasha! Why can't things ever go right for him! Please update soon... I look forward to it soooo much.
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Title: Argg
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 16:06 EDT
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How could you do that to my Inuyasha again? That was mean. Stupid Kagome!
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Title: Argg
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 16:06 EDT
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How could you do that to my Inuyasha again? That was mean. Stupid Kagome!
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Title: Argg
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 16:06 EDT
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How could you do that to my Inuyasha again? That was mean. Stupid Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Fairyqueen mab On: August 09, 2006 05:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god how can you leave the chapter like that!?!?!?!? i hope kagome dies i never like her anyway inu/kouga forever!!!
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Reviewed By: Crayon Tyrant On: August 04, 2006 00:17 EDT
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When I first looked at this story, on fanfic.net, I was excited to get to read something that actually looked like it had some thought put into it. There's a ton of stories that are pointless lemons (don't get me wrong, love the lemons) or are just lame plotless stories. I'm glad I got to spend a kagillion years reading your story and I want you to addon soon! The way Inuyasha and Kouga are portrayed is so cute, and I love Inuyasha's little puppy form! Anyways, I hope you continue soon... I guess I'll actually have to check every once in a while to see if you've written more. *^-^* Once again, love the story! Write more!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 12:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
awe super kawaii update soon!!!:) i wonda wa that bitch kagome is gonna do damn i hate her^_^
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