| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA got her back!!
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 26, 2005 12:38 CDT
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omg im laughing again! i know i really shouldnt be laughing but its hillarious! those poor guys! if kagome keeps up like that she really is gonna kill them....and possibly kouga while she's at it. the scents (and *cough* sounds) will eventually drive him nutz! roflmao!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0_0 .......... wow! Thank you for the lemon!!
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Reviewed By: CarrieFay (not signed in) On: September 25, 2005 13:49 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh man i love it! Great chapter! Very amusing! I cant wait for the next chapter cuz i have a feeling its gonna be as good as all the others! LoL Buh bye!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 22, 2005 15:39 CDT
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no updates in a while. not rushin just your stories keep me goin.a.s.a.p. will you update this story that, love story with suki and shioris dad, and loving kagome?love ya! jakens in australia right now so he cant talk.bye and thanks for everything!!!
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Title: CarrieFay
Reviewed By: CarrieFay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! I just finished it tough, cuz i have scool so it took me a couple of days! After seeing all the SUPER-long chapters and then this last one i was like, "NOOOOO!" lol its really good. Cant wait till you update! I dont know if this site sends out messages on updates or not. If not could you email me at fay77_7@hotmail.com? That would be so great! Thanks so much buh bye!
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Title: Excellent ----- >>don't hate me for my review though, i'm trying to be constructive
Reviewed By: Angela On: September 14, 2005 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're fanfic is excellent, it was deep yet lightly glossed which is an extremely hard thing to find in fanfics, and i cant commend you on how well you keep the lengths of your chapters so readers don't lose interest and have time to breathe at the same time, although i have to say don't take this the wrong way, but the characters are a bit off, inuyasha would have bit Sessh's head off after he kissed kagome reasons or not...but maybe i'm the only one who see's that,1 small note though the use of repetition can get weary if not used apropriately, for example, how the characters fall asleep so often (and quickly) the use of kissing each other on foreheads (although it was very cute) and how inuyasha tone is always used "gruffly" just a couple of examples, i don't know if you or anyone noticed them, i'm probably too much of a perfectionist, so dont take my word into too much consideration, your story is amazingly presented well nonetheless, so do keep weaving to it, because from everyone else's reviews, we all busting for more...call it a human psychi thing or the fact that you're a really talented storyteller. so congrats on the great story, hope to see more soon! ~Angela~
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Reviewed By: Darth Plagueis On: September 10, 2005 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fanfic, Sesshoumaru is my favorite character. please up date me on the story at Darkknight257@comcast.net thanks.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Be careful with the sugar!! Your chapters are too sweet!!^_^
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 09, 2005 15:59 CDT
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sorry i didnt write back sooner. i had the english assignment from hades.i love the stories!all hail to whisperingwolf! the refrigerator:grrrrr. speed:why is the frige "grrring"at me? the frige door opens. meatloaf:i have come for you speed. speed:OH MY GOLDFISH!i knew this day would come!its my dads mutated meatloaf!i told him it was mutated,but he called me a dumbass okie. jaken:thats because you are a dumbass okie. speed:excuse me whisperingwolf.*cries of pain and torture come from the slimy toad as he is beaten with mirokus staff* meatloaf:may i be of some assistence?*meatloaf helps me beat jaken to a pile of green play-doh* speed to meatloaf:im still not eating you meatloaf:i wouldn't want to be in your nasty mouth even if you payd me. spee:thats what orlando bloom said when i revealed my feelings to him orlando:and i ment it too1 spee:well at least johnny depp loves me johnny:actually no i dont,we're just friends speed:damn.oh well cant blame a gal for tryin'. love the stores. update A.S.A.P.! youre doing a great job!
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 09, 2005 08:26 CDT
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pouting puppies? why can't i image sesshoumaru pouting? but lord is it worth the effort to try. lol. What's next?
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: September 08, 2005 08:11 CDT
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*waits patiently* lol. explore all you need, I'll be here whenever you post. :) i think im addicted....
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: September 06, 2005 16:13 CDT
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I SPELLED "QUIT" WRONG IN MY LAST REVIEW!oh wll i never said i was smart. jaken:damn straight! speed:ahh you want your beating early, do you jaken. Jaken:i dont want it at all! Sesshomaru:speedy,dont kill him. speed:oh no my love never kill.i want to keep jaken around so i can beat him when im angry. sesshomaru:why beat jaken though? speed:its better than a whole in your gut isnt it darling?*gives fluffy a killing glance* sesshomaru:oh yes then *clears throat* carry on jaken: lord sesshomaru sesshomaru:sorry jaken. better you than me speed:thats my boy. jaken:i feel so unloved speed:thats because you are. great story love it! update soon!
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Title: it's not fair
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 23:00 CDT
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I am under the distinct impression that you are trying to drive us all nuts. I love this story, but I keep having fits when I can only read ONE new chapter at a time. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: curly211 (nli) On: September 05, 2005 17:11 CDT
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Thanks for the update! I just love your stories, they're so cool! ^^ update again soon.
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