| "A Mother For Rin" Reviews/Comments [ 140 ] |
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Reviewed By: princessAly2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 14:16 CDT
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love it cant wait for an update. poor yasha with a tree in his foot, i know how much it hurts i almost had my foot taken off by a tree.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story!!!!
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Title: Nice Work
Reviewed By: Selenity Jade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was very nicely done. Very good grammar for the most part and nice writing style. The only problem I had was that there didn't seem to be much in the way of good flow and storyline. It's very hard to keep track of whether one of the characters is in the present or in a memory, and then you kind of throw a lot of 'cliche' type themes in, like Shippou calling Kagome Mamma, and Sesshoumaru turning sappy around Rin to the point he's almost unrecognizable. However, if you put aside a lot of the OOC moments it is a very good read. Nice job.
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Title: A Mother for Rin
Reviewed By: ILoveInuYashasTheMost On: June 02, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MORE!!MORE!!MORE!!! So far this is an excellent story. Can't wait for updates. Keep em coming.
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Title: Your back!!!
Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2006 23:37 CDT
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I thought you had this story started. Oh well. Anyways I love this chapter. It really shows their father/daughter relationship. I can't wait to see more. Later.
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Reviewed By: What was my last username? Meh, It's Katie On: April 27, 2006 22:21 CDT
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OMFGS you're updating!!!!11one1 Will you be updating regularly again, or will it still be just once every so often?
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Reviewed By: not y_turtle speedy_turtle On: April 27, 2006 15:26 CDT
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clearing up my name!
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Reviewed By: y_turtle(not signed in) On: April 27, 2006 15:25 CDT
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i said "write" not start over!but hey as long as you continue im good!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 15:52 CDT
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ok.i am a member now.i kmow you visted today..now write!i'll write with you.i only have one chapter up because i cant figure out how to make the story end up as the summary too.:*
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark On: April 12, 2006 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story... this is my all time favourite story... I hope you will continue... inu/kag/sess... it is really good how you actually made them get together... I was wondering if I could use the same pairings for my story... I haven't posted it yet, I will soon... must update and give me your reply... must update...
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Reviewed By: raven of the dark On: April 12, 2006 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story... this is my favourite story... I hope you will continue... inu/kag/sess... it is really good how you actually made them get together... I was wondering if I could use the same pairings for my story... I haven't posted it yet, I will soon... must update and give me your reply... must update...
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Reviewed By: Decano [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Magnificent!!! You must continue! I will not allow you to stop! This is the only story I actually spend my time to read! You must cmoe back! Please! I beg of you, please update this story!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: March 06, 2006 18:03 CST
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my spam code is irak..thats funny!anyways....DID YOU DIE? I SAW NO OBITUARY IN THE PAPER FOR A WHISPERINGWOLF!HURRY IT UP!GRRRRRR.....IM WATCHING YOU!
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Reviewed By: speedy_turtle On: February 26, 2006 20:28 CST
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I MISS YOU!!!!!!!!!PLEASE COME BACK!curly211 and odd_ulrich miss.review curly lets talk.youre our bud!we care about you!and plus we are number one fans!see ya!SQWEE HAAAAAA!!!!
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Reviewed By: lovely liz On: February 09, 2006 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh mine kagome is pregnet. this story is amazing i cant wait to know what happen next. oh what happens to nuraku wiell this love stuff is happening and is meroku going to live to merry sango. i love yours story so far. ses+kag+inu and san+mer forever. lots of huggs
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