| "All by myself" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Amazing job. I mean... really. I can't believe how well it was written. Usually in fics, there's a variation in writing style and I'll have my favorite chapters that the author really went all out in their writing. Not with this fic. ALL the chapters stood out on their own! I liked how you let us know how Vegeta felt, but let him keep his dignity and his pride. And his POV after the Cell fight... WOW! The Trunks chapter was very cute... and original. And I totally loved how you gave Bulma some depth, especially in her POV chapter after Cell. Not to mention that the lemons were outstanding! Very creative... never seen any like them. VERY original work you have here. I love it!! I can't wait to read more from you. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Natz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 14:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shivers* I am trembling while I write this. Well, it's really hard for me to express how good reading chapter 5. One step closer. That song describes so much of my own emotions that it is scary. I can scream those words right now and feel the tears pressing down from the insides of my eyes. Just wanted to let you know how much it ment to me. |
Reviewed By: Amora On: October 02, 2002 11:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it
it was beautiful
i would love to read another one of ur stories |
Reviewed By: Buffyirl5009 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow tis is a get fic..I ..I ......I was cryin I am surpissed I havn't drowned yet.... The salty water fro my tears is draining though.. My mom is kinda mad to but she'll get ver it Great story |
Reviewed By: scar On: June 26, 2002 12:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!! I finally knoe what happens in chap. 5+6! i read the first 4 on ff.net...
so happy am i, so wierd it is to be the saiyan no ouji...
wahtevr!
-scar |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 04, 2002 01:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! nothing spectacular, you say? HA!!! that was INCREDIBLE!!!!! you are an awesome writer. you wrote vegeta's perspective BEAUTIFULLY!!!! there may not have been a whole bunch of action, but for a writer as good as you are, it's not necessary. PEACHY KEEN AND ALL THAT GOOD STUFF!!!! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl On: June 01, 2002 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last line was wonderful! It gave me the chills!!! You really outdid yourself on this Ember, pat yourself on the back! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 10:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well girl, you've done it again! You never cease to amaze me (it was even better the second time around! lol) I really do love this chapter...you already know all about it. ;) And, again, you're very welcome...after all, what am I good for if you don't send me stuff to read? (Besides embarrassing you, rotfl!) |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 08:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad Vegeta decided to stay |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 31, 2002 05:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG this is what I call incredible awesomeness. You are talented beyond belief and you should be proud of yourself and this story. BRAVO!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2002 07:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
good God.... you are incredible! truly incredible! that was such an eloquently written story.. you make us v/b writers proud :)! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 21, 2002 00:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow! you are an incredibly taleented writer! that last chapter was beautifully done. i love your choice of song for it. i love linkin park too! the songs you chose fit so well for what you wrote, it was brilliant!
you should definitely write another chapter (please!) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 20, 2002 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliantly written! Fantastic! Awesome! Excellent! And it was dame good too. Wow, did you capture their attitudes or what!! Please add on more chap to kinda wrap it up. I can't say enough about this fic. Great job Ember!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades (too lazy to sign in) On: May 20, 2002 16:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
*Jaw drop* Oh wow Ember-chan! This was probably the best one! I know I've said that before, but this time I really mean it! Of course I loved it, with good reason. I could feel the tension and the anger just as if I was the one Vegeta was yelling at. Pure and total coolness. ~_^ |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 13:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hellz yeah you should add another chapter girl. You can't leave us without one!!!!! |
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