| "All by myself" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowzers! That was really great! I do think you need to write another chapter, kinda with Bulma and Vegeta making up, and getting past this terrible time. |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2002 08:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a very good job on this one |
Reviewed By: Elly_Leaverton [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 16:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very IC |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 12:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you know I was just listening to Linkin Park? Wow, we have so much in common...
Love this story, always will. Later! |
Reviewed By: Jay On: April 26, 2002 20:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You stick to his character so wonderfully! I wonder if Vegeta needs to be taught a little lesson? Maybe making him jealous? That might do the trick. After all, how much rejection can one woman stand. I say that Bulma oughta teach him a lesson or two. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl On: April 26, 2002 14:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo! Well done Ember! It's so sad...but so ture of Vegeta's nature. I love the way you keep in in character! I'm hoping there will be a continuance to this...maybe? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 26, 2002 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME CHAPTER!! FANTASTIC LEMON!! Bulma's pain is killing me, and don't even get me started on Vegeta. Stubborn bastard. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2002 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sigh, I had to add this chapter to my faves list! You know I simply love this ficcy, girl! And how Vegeta in the end goes over to Bulma's lab to tell him how he feels...I know that made Turnks feel all warm and fuzzy and inside, knowing that his parents in fact loved each other with a burning passion. Good work! |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2002 03:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was positively wonderful as usual!! ^_^ wow this was so great...i'm still thinking about how this should be a movie hahaha. *sigh* so wonderful! keep up the great work tomodachi! talk to ya soon! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: April 10, 2002 00:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfection. Everyone was in character. I love this and I hope you write more. |
Reviewed By: Lady Macbeth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2002 00:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely [b]wonderful[/b] Vegeta/Bulma fic. You portrayed both their characters beautifully, as well as Mirai no Trunks's character. The story flowed smoothly and you did a great job of showing the inner emotion and interaction between Vegeta and Bulma during one of the most vague and unseen parts of their relationship.
There are scattered spelling errors through the three chapters, and it [b]is[/b] a popular subject, which is why I subtracted points in those areas. ^_^; If you want, you can send me the files and I'll highlight the things that I caught in it. |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2002 19:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Just...just...wow! I know I've said this before, but I really think M. Trunks's POV is the BEST chapter I've ever read (from you or anybody else)! The descriptions make a powerful impression on the imaginatiion and the conversations are so touching I almost cried. Really Ember, this was just awesome! |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2002 18:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
kami. im glade you put that in. it really shows how thing MOST likly happend. and that was funny when Bulma was taling about the only time she really saw Veggie's soft side. im still giggiling. and when you put in the hospital part that was so sweet. AND NOW MORE THEN EVER I WISH DBZ WAS REAL *crying because DBZ will never be real* and i feel even worse because im lisening to 'with arms wide open' by creed. it really helps the fic if you lisen to music that fits the fic.
great fic and even better cause M.Trunks is in it,
:)mizu:P
P.S. the ending was so sweet i think if it were candy not even i could eat it |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2002 17:42 EST
Comment/Review:
That was so sad but the ending was very sweet. Veggie was so in to character it was scary. Anyway loved the fic and it really amazes me cause I never read song fics.
first loved song fic: excellent,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2002 14:26 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I like the part when Vegeta finds Bulma sitting on the floor crying... |
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