| "Seductive Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: June 08, 2005 10:57 PDT
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Whoot! this is great! I do hope you continue it, I am so interested to find out what happens next. You characterize everyone well and your writing is very good! please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:10 PDT
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you're spelling her name wrong. It's either Keiko, or Kayko, the two different ways. It took me a few to figure out who she was....I'm just slow like that. Other than that, I luv the fic and update soon please.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 18:08 PDT
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well, well, it's fairly original... and good grammar and spelling (so hard to find!!!)
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 15:51 PDT
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please write more!!!!! i love it HIEI /KAGS FOREVER!!!! ohhh it's so good!!!ja ne
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Title: Delicious
Reviewed By: hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliaphobia (too lazy to log in) On: June 06, 2005 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei is delicious, isn't he? I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! hippo
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Title: AWSOME XD
Reviewed By: Destiny's_darkangel823 On: June 06, 2005 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is AWSOME pleassse update soon!!!!!!!XD ja-ne
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Reviewed By: HevensAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 16:13 PDT
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*gasp!* it's soo good! please write more!!!! :-D
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