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| "Seductive Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 › » ] | Reviewed By: Bad_boy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 01:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a great story, i like they way you put it together, though it was very anitclimatic. though, i was fun to read, and i'm no better. great story, please update it soon.
| Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 23:11 PDT
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Wonderful chapter, I love how you are portraying Youko. Too many people pass his character off as an oversexed playboy without a brain in his head. It's wonderful that you are giving him the depth of character that he deserves. I look forward to reading future chapters, Update soon please.
| Reviewed By: moonscout11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 21:01 PDT
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THAT WAS COOL! PLEASE UPDATE!
| Title: Review Chapter Three
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 16:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I take back what I said in my first review. This fic is totally original and I LOVE IT!!! I love the characterizations. I love the writing style. I love the mood. I love the ambiance. I love the plot (or at least what I've seen of it). I love the interactions, and MOST ESPECIALLY, I love how it's practically typo/mispelling/grammar atrocity-free! I LOVE YOU! Please continue. This is going up there right next to "Par Tout Autre Nom" (formerly "By Any Other Name") as a grade-A, first class, Kagome/Kurama fanfic! I can't wait to read more! When will Kurama accidentally see Kagome's scars? What will Kagome say as an excuse? Will Kurama notice the scars were inflicted by a Demon? How is the new antagonist going to get wind of Kagome? When will Kagome meet Genkai? What will happen in the mean time? The list of questions goes on! ALSO: I think that they should all see a horror movie, so that Kagome and Yusuke can laugh at it. Keiko (funnily enough) would probably be the only one scared! Kagome could sympathize with the "monsters"! It would be a wonderful opportunity for Kurama to make observations about her! Whatever you do, please continue writing! ... ... Luck, Kin ... ... ... ... ... ... PS: I love how you've put a baddie in here, and how it won't be solely romance. That story path can get slow, tedious, boring, and redundant. I LOVE YOU AND CONTINUE!
| Title: Review Chapter Two
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! You had them "meet" but didn't force anything! You're going to draw the information aout over long periods of time! I can hardly believe my good fortune in finding this fanfic! I love you! You're brilliant! You're restrained! You're NON-CLICHE! You rock! ... ... ... I can see you are setting up a Kurama/Kagome pairing here, but all I want to say is: Go For It! BUT DON'T RUIN IT! Don't wreck it with that "love/lust at first sight" shit. That is dumb and tacky. Draw it out, make the chase for information last long. ... ... ... May I say again that I LOVE YOU?!?! ... ... ... Ahem, Thank you and please continue writing your wonderful story. Gratefully, Kin-chan Pandun
| Title: Review Chapter One
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 15:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this story has, oddly enough, not the most original concept when it comes to getting Kagome and the tantei to meet. HOWEVER, this piece is wrought so wonderfully, and done with so much care, that I think this will turn out to be an exceptional fanfiction. Also, you combined two cliches to form your own story, and, in doing so, have created a new thing, with your own style and mood. I really love this fic, and it feels different from so many others that I've read. Please continue, and be careful not to rush a "spill the beans" confrontation between Kagome and the Tantei. Although I doubt you're in danger of that. I really love both the writing style, the ambiance, and the fact that it is practically error-free. Please, please, please continue, I would love to read more than the few chapters you have posted here. ... ... Luck, Kin-chan Pandun
| Reviewed By: Reiti Hecam On: June 11, 2005 07:02 PDT
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Oh, this is so good! I hope InuYasha comes back so Kagome can sit him so hard, he...Heh heh heh...
| Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 08:48 PDT
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I am really enjoying this fic. I like the fact that you made Kagome Keiko's cousin. You don't see that too often. I do hope you update soon.
| Reviewed By: Ayeka Penor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so hard to find a comprehensive crossover...and I must say I'm impressed. You've kept things going at a smooth pace, no uncomfortable leaps ordrawn out scenes. You have also kept the whole 'I sense an awe-inspiring power' thing down to a minimum. As much fun as it is to write about powerful characters, presenting them in a plausible manner is difficult. Excellent job thus far.
| Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323(not logged in) On: June 09, 2005 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
| Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 09, 2005 14:05 PDT
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eh?? It's not all that good......my story I mean. I like this new developpement in the plot... it makes it a fair bit more suspensful and I wonder when the two meet face to face. youko againsdt teresa...whose seductive powers will win the heart of Kagome first? ^^. I have to say that this is the longest review I've ever written.....umm....... ... ...
| Title: LALALALALALA
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA! UPDATE AGAIN UPDATE AGAIN
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 09:41 PDT
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no problem, I only knew it cuz of the manga and on this website I found that tells the englisha and japanese spelling. you're right, the fights between Keiko and Yusuke are almost exactly the same as Kagome and InuYasha. male says stupid stuff, female gets pissed, male's in the dirt. ^_^ update soon please.
| Reviewed By: moonscout On: June 08, 2005 20:07 PDT
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that was cool! i hope kurama and kagome get together!
| Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:32 PDT
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So far a good start, seeing Kagome as Keiko's cousin is fairly unusual which is good. Im curious on how badly Kagome is going to flip out when she meets Kurama at dinner and when she finally gets to meet Hiei. Update soon please
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