| "Seductive Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Title: Chibes
Reviewed By: Chibes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 00:26 PDT
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NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!SHIPPPOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great story I just hope Kagome doesn'tfall for the suductress's evil plan. Shippo doesn't die does he? I love the fox, **cuddles him** So can I guess what happens, Kagome saves Shippo from evil lady and gets caught but evil lady's powers don'twork because of the Shikon no Tama. Sorry its my bad habbit to guess what will happen, that means I've gotten into it.
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Title: Seductive Embrace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 18:37 PDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Kurama, Hiei, and Kagome?
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Title: um... please be hiei/kag
Reviewed By: starwind327 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 12:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol. i must admit - enjoyment factor - pretty high. lol. i am just hoping she ends up with hiei - way too many k/k fics out there.
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 15, 2005 15:42 PDT
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that was an interesting encounter...
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: June 15, 2005 15:16 PDT
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I love it, please continue!
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 14:04 PDT
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whatever you do in your story, don't kill shippo!!! i love that little fox! i feel bad for him right now. anyways, great story! ^^ keep it up!
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Reviewed By: lsjghsrkdfhj On: June 15, 2005 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHH I can't wait for you to update again.
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 06:54 PDT
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She hit the nail on the head with that about Hiei killing her. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 03:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, a very nice fic, i love it so far.Can't wait till you update again, so please update soon, k? ^_^
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Title: Review Chapter Four, Continued
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 18:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I can't believe my review was so long I had to submit it twice!) ....................... Anyway, on with the review. I'm very flattered that you used my idea to help you out with the story. I'm glad that I could be of help. Also, the part where the other girl tears off Kagome's shirt? I couldn't figure out what was going on there between the time Kagome dodged (what did she dodge, a slap?) and the part where her shirt was ripped open. Also, I'm not sure if Keiko should buy the whole "it was a dog" thing. Personally, I thought it was cool how her lame excuse was actually the truth in a roundabout way of looking at it. Maybe you could have Keiko try and talk to Kagome about it? Also, you should have Kagome keep Kurama's shirt (they can forget, or he can offer). Kurama can use that as excuse to talk to her again. I'm curious as to wether Kagome will find out/make any more observations on "Shuichi's" Youki? ALSO: If you kill Shippou, you will die. The kit and Kagome do not deserve it, after all they've both been through (esp. Shippou) to see each other again. Will you have Shippou reffer to Kagome as "mother"? I think it would be really sweet. Sess and Kouga could drag a broken Shippou to her, she would call out his name, he would go: "Kagome?", she would sob, and say: "Yes, Shippou, It's me." His head would be in her lap and he would go "Can I call you mother?", she would sob/smile "Yes" just B4 he passed out. It would be so perfect! *squeals* -_-; Thanks, Kin
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Title: Review Chapter Four
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 17:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really liked this chapter (you using my idea had only the smallest influence on this opinion). You kept to your previously established characterizations. You did the movie scene wonderfully. You left clues about Kagome's past, but nothing overt besides her scars. Questions for this fic now include: When will Hiei and Kagome meet? Will Kagome just loll around tomorrow, and have nothing important happen (ie: skim over it, and then go on to the next day after putting in some fun Keiko/Kagome interactions)? When will Kagome go to Genkai's? How will she locate Genkai's? Will she ask for Directions from someone (Keiko?) and have them realize it's Genkai's, and then tell her they know the place/maybe will escort them there? What will Genkai sense of Kagome? What will Kagome sense of HER? Will Kagome be honest with her from the start? Will anyone (Hiei/Keiko) overhear Kagome's explanation to Genkai? How will Kagome explain her knowing about youkai? When will Hiei and Kurama see each other again/swap information on Kagome? What will happen to Shippou? Will Shippou be okay? What will Shippou reveal about Kagome? Will Shippou reveal anything about Kagome? What will happen between Kouga and Sesshoumaru? When will Sesshoumaru and Kouga miss Shippou? Will they be able to mount an immediately succesful rescue? Or will they have to go to the ningenkai and retrieve/confront Kagome? How are they/when are they coming to ningenkai? Will any of the Tantei meet them?
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Reviewed By: juana-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:08 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story. espically with Youko! ^^ Anyway, please keep writing!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:40 PDT
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I haven't noticed anything wrong...all fun and stuffs. update soon please. Kagome's another puzzle for Yoko to just try to figure out...but that's one puzzle that he'll never solve completely.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 09:28 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the was so sad if it were me i'd had kagome straight beat the shit out of the lil bitch. but it's still a nice story very nice can't wait for the update.
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 06:21 PDT
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He-he! Very cool chappie, very cool. I love this story and I think that you are a very good writer. Really enjoyed it, more soon please!
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