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Title: Doing fairly well!
Reviewed By: Kagami Hirosai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 03:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I have just finished reading through all of the chapters posted thus far and I have to say, you do have quite a way with words! I love the plot, and you are doing a great job at keeping the characters as close to their orignal personality's as possible. I like the fact that it is not "Autolove" with the romance, and you have kept kagome from being a pansy, unlike most people who decide, "Kagome is a girly girl and cant do shit even though she is one of the most powerful beings ever. " And crap like that! I cant wait to see more from you, and really, I do want to see more, you have a great style, the typo's are at the min, I think I have only seen like, one, ever. You might want to work on your paragraphing though, it is a bit bulky, if it flowed a bit more , it might make it alot easier to look at and not confuse the readers with the various odd indents. Other then that, and that is the only thing I could find that needed a bit of a rating, you are doing a great job! Keep it up and I wait eagerly for the next chapter! Kagami.
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 09:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fun story... I hope you update soon. i like how it looks like this is going to be a Kag/Kur/Hiei... It's just the thing Kagome would do... not being able to choose one or the other because she likes them both the same...SO she gets them both! HEhehehe! O_o (wow...too much sugar for me this morning!)
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: HotAngelFromHell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 20:26 PST
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this is such an interesting and amazing story! please do us a favor and grace us with your amazing talent for fanfictions! please update!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 08:17 PST
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I love this story and can't wait to find out what happends next!
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Title: Hiei/Kagome
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 16:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's soooo romantic!!! *^_^* I hope that Hiei and Kagome get together! I think it would be great for this awsome story of yours! keep up the good work!!! *^_^* JA-NE!!!!!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Title: Miko
Reviewed By: MikosWish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Hiei, he probably isnt use to such feelings. He's probably all confused. Man those two really are going to be at it. Kurama and Hiei that is. I wonder if Hiei is going to yell at her at all. I feel sorry for her, she must be soo lost.
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Title: Seductive Embrace
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 12:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Hiei and Kagome please?
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Reviewed By: Red Kitsune Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 16:09 PST
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That was a very good chapter, I enjoyed it. Poor Hiei, he's so upset. I can't wait to hear what Kurama thinks of the bond. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 02:50 PST
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Cant wait till they get to the Makai! I wonder what Sesshomaru will say about her having demon excorts. Especially with her interests for Kurama & Hiei. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Kurama/Kagome/Hiei & if not that then Kag/Hiei
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 00:19 PST
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Please update real soon. Poor Hiei, wonder how he will react, especially with everyone there. Will he listen to them or will he turn his back on them. Hiei/Kagome/Kurama.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Kogas Hentai Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 00:16 PST
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I'm just having so much fun with this story. It's so gripping and creative. Poor Shippo. I hope he'll be okay. I'm glad that you put Koga into the fic too. I just love my Koga. I think Sess will have a lot to say about this. He's so cool and always has the answers. I really feel that he's the one to make everything alright. For some reason, though, I want Kag to end up with Kur/Yoko instead of Hiei. I'm not sure why. I just think that that's the way it should go. But whatever you decide will be great.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 22:08 PST
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Ahh poor Hiei, I gotta feel for him though at the same time I just wanna smack him for assuming the worst. Hopefully he figures out that what he thinks he knows isn't exactly what is the truth. Kagome is going to need him, I don't care how arrogant Youko is being. He cannot handle everything by himself and while Yusuke and Kuwabara will be of help things can go wrong. Another wonderful chapter, I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
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Title: Miko
Reviewed By: MikosWish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 20:22 PST
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That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it Please update soon. Sesshoumaru I dout will be very unhappy that he did not try to talk her out of it. Lol I was almost expecting those two to fight it out a little. I wonder what Hiei will do if he finds out Youko kissed Kagome. Hhehehe it should get interesting.
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 22:46 PST
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Why did Hiei leave, knowing that Kurama was near? (Sorry I'm a bit of a flake today.) Hiei/Kagome/Kurama, those three are perfect.
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 20:19 PST
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Hiei is in Makai so once Kagome gets there wont he know bc of their bond & what is he gonna think about Youko making a move on her? And what will Koenma think of a human going into Makai? Surely he'd know. I cant wait for the next chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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