| "Seductive Embrace" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: BrokenSouledPoetess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 08:48 PDT
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I am really enjoying this fic. I like the fact that you made Kagome Keiko's cousin. You don't see that too often. I do hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ayeka Penor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so hard to find a comprehensive crossover...and I must say I'm impressed. You've kept things going at a smooth pace, no uncomfortable leaps ordrawn out scenes. You have also kept the whole 'I sense an awe-inspiring power' thing down to a minimum. As much fun as it is to write about powerful characters, presenting them in a plausible manner is difficult. Excellent job thus far.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323(not logged in) On: June 09, 2005 14:52 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: June 09, 2005 14:05 PDT
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eh?? It's not all that good......my story I mean. I like this new developpement in the plot... it makes it a fair bit more suspensful and I wonder when the two meet face to face. youko againsdt teresa...whose seductive powers will win the heart of Kagome first? ^^. I have to say that this is the longest review I've ever written.....umm....... ... ...
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Title: LALALALALALA
Reviewed By: Fox Vixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA! UPDATE AGAIN UPDATE AGAIN
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 09:41 PDT
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no problem, I only knew it cuz of the manga and on this website I found that tells the englisha and japanese spelling. you're right, the fights between Keiko and Yusuke are almost exactly the same as Kagome and InuYasha. male says stupid stuff, female gets pissed, male's in the dirt. ^_^ update soon please.
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Reviewed By: moonscout On: June 08, 2005 20:07 PDT
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that was cool! i hope kurama and kagome get together!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 16:32 PDT
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So far a good start, seeing Kagome as Keiko's cousin is fairly unusual which is good. Im curious on how badly Kagome is going to flip out when she meets Kurama at dinner and when she finally gets to meet Hiei. Update soon please
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: June 08, 2005 10:57 PDT
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Whoot! this is great! I do hope you continue it, I am so interested to find out what happens next. You characterize everyone well and your writing is very good! please continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:10 PDT
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you're spelling her name wrong. It's either Keiko, or Kayko, the two different ways. It took me a few to figure out who she was....I'm just slow like that. Other than that, I luv the fic and update soon please.
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 18:08 PDT
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well, well, it's fairly original... and good grammar and spelling (so hard to find!!!)
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 15:51 PDT
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please write more!!!!! i love it HIEI /KAGS FOREVER!!!! ohhh it's so good!!!ja ne
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Title: Delicious
Reviewed By: hippopotomonstrosesquippedaliaphobia (too lazy to log in) On: June 06, 2005 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei is delicious, isn't he? I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon! hippo
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Title: AWSOME XD
Reviewed By: Destiny's_darkangel823 On: June 06, 2005 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is AWSOME pleassse update soon!!!!!!!XD ja-ne
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Reviewed By: HevensAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 16:13 PDT
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*gasp!* it's soo good! please write more!!!! :-D
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