| "The Poison of Erised!" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Skyhawks On: August 21, 2005 10:03 CDT
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Will Kagome get pregnant?
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Title: Goody
Reviewed By: vermillion 3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fantastic story! I couldn't stop till the latest chap. Keep it up! You got a great imagination.
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Reviewed By: The Black Fox On: August 14, 2005 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! It was well written. Matter of fact is was one of the best that I have read. You hace to finish it.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 12:18 CDT
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I also wanted to state one other thing. In the previous chapters, you mentioned in your notes about not posting here anymore because no one is reviewing. Just because you don't get a lot of reviews, doesn't mean people aren't reading. A lot of times, people have other things to do, and reviewing a chapter may take longer than they have time for. As for me, I don't review every single chapter. It gets repetative and redundant. I will, however, review what I've read up to a certain point when there's been something new added to the plot. But personally speaking, saying that you aren't going to post on a particular website anymore because of lack of reviews is a bit childish.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the changes in Kagome are in part due to the potion Sesshomaru has given her, and part of their mating, that way she will match him. I personally think it's permenant. I also think the blue eyes was she herself showing through. I also think that she will be upset at first with Sesshomaru, not with the act itself, but the fact that he thought that was his only chance at being with her. But I think that once she talks to him about it, she will be accepting of the whole thing, since Sesshomaru did have good intentions. She also realizes that he is taking care of her, and caring for her, so that may soften the blow a bit. I think she does have some hidden feelings for him before all of this started, that's why the potion seems to be wearing off faster. It's also an unforseen side effect of the potion. I think, from what Miroku said, that the witch knew the side effects, but for one reason or another, did not mention them to Sesshomaru. I think it's a part of her trying to bring them together. As for her family, I think they will be very accepting of what happened. Her mother took Inuyasha in, so there's nothing to say that she wouldn't do the same for Sesshomaru, especially since he does treat Kagome in a much better manner than Inuyasha. Thinking of all the times Kagome has gone home because of something Inuyasha said or did, I think her mother will take that into consideration.
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 00:53 CDT
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I want another chapter... And now I demand twins!!! Well... maybe not demand... but you should've had a baby already so you owe us twins now! Keep it up and we'll be expecting triplets... Just kiddin', but maybe four...? I mean... Well if that was the case then poor Kagome! But... How about five?
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing your story is great. I want to know if Kagome is going to turn into a demon forever.
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Title: Virgo
Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing your story is great. I want to know if Kagome is going to turn into a demon forever.
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 18:17 CDT
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dont stop it there! please update! please update! ill be moving all week and wont be able to read! Grr lol..PLEASE! ps does she know anything now? i mean its like..too much suspense with all these questions! Please, please start anwsering them or..do something! lol
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Title: Good Story (as always)
Reviewed By: chair-chan On: August 10, 2005 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! This story is great! I just read it. You posted (or edited) everything so quickly. Practically all of the chapters say August 8! I don't know how you could write so much in so little time (either that, or you just recently edited everything, in which case I'm going to sound very foolish). I hope you aren't neglecting a life for us poor readers. Well, just writing to tell you that you have another reader hooked. You're like a drug...heh heh...*looks around as crowd slowly backs away* 'Neeways, keep up the amazing chapters! :P -Rosie, aka chair-chan (don't ask how I got the name)
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Reviewed By: princessgranny On: August 09, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow your story is really interesting. Grl all these questions once one is answered another comes along. Weird please keep writing
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Title: Correction
Reviewed By: Cynbad146-again On: August 08, 2005 10:05 CDT
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Attracted to Sesshoumaru . . . .Sorry for the previous error.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: August 08, 2005 10:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's nice to see that you are considering continuing the story on MM and AFF. I just wanted to add that I too, am a reader. This story is good reading but a little OC for me. It is hard for me to imagine that InuYasha would not try harder for Kagome, even though he often sticks his foot in his mouth, or, that Kagome would so easily leave him without testing her feelings for him (they are so strong in the series). It is not hard for me to think that someone would be attractive to Sesshoumaru with his knowledge, power, and looks. However, I am always attracted to the InuYasha character because he comes across as having a passionate nature with a tremendous amount of heart (eventhough he screws up alot). These are just some thoughts that I have been reflecting on. I am enjoying this story with your different point of view. I will continue to check in to see where you take us. Cynbad146
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Title: The Poison Of Erised!
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:22 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Dragoncountess98 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 20:16 CDT
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I love this story! Please update! i cant wait to see how kag will react! will she stay youkai this time? i hope so, if only to see the look of shock and envy on inu s face! lol And so there will be a Lady kagome of the western lands! lol Please update!
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