| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 08:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i do hope that you update soon. Your story is great i cant wait to see what the next chapter will be like. :)
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Reviewed By: Tianna On: August 14, 2005 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I really enjoy reading that, I thought the cereal part was oh so very funny. Can't wait to see what hapens next but of course I will. So good work and keepe it up!
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: August 04, 2005 21:31 EDT
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Nice written chapter you have here. I canot wait til the next chapter, keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing.
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Reviewed By: dragongigi On: July 29, 2005 19:08 EDT
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You want to leave Inuyasha in the dark but give hints/clues to Kagome's identity. Working with Kagome's atraction to Inuyasha and add in the pressure of her staying in role as Kikyou. Throw in a family reunion in which Kikyou and Kagome have to be in the same room. In addition you can make the girl who greets Kagome in the first chapter a psychopath and she stalks Kagome and wants her back in the small theathers and she tracks Kagome down playing the role of Inuyasha's wife and reveals it to the media. Or you can have her threaten Inuyasha about the publicity stunt he is doing.
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting more interesting. You definitely have me hooked. As for the marriage and what name Kagome uses, I think what you said about her saying "Kikyo" is her stage name is a great idea. That way, Kagome is getting married and Kikyo's real marriage is safe. Awesome job on this chapter and please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: July 29, 2005 11:45 EDT
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SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD!! i really like this story, and kagome's impressions of kikyo were fabulous! I can't wait to see what happens when inu finds out! PLEASE update soon, sooner than the last time.
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Reviewed By: neng On: July 29, 2005 10:02 EDT
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aha... i did understand it. alright within that chapter i got a little bit of the kikyou that i think you are trying to portray... i think... somwat... ahh buh humbug. well i await the next installment.
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Reviewed By: A&W On: July 05, 2005 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far. Please continue. It's really good. I was just wondering if people who were close to Kagome and Kikyo would know about the plan 'cause don't you think that if their parents saw Kagome impersinating her sister on tv, they would be like, hey, that's not Kikyo. But whatever. The story's great. two thumbs up:)
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Reviewed By: *inuluvher151*(notsignedin) On: July 04, 2005 03:40 EDT
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hey this is really great so far. hope you continue. can't wait until you update hope it's soon
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Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 05:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED THIS STORY! Please update with another chapter as soon as you have the time! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: June 29, 2005 03:45 EDT
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I like it I like it., Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: squeeker On: June 28, 2005 16:20 EDT
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i like this story. its an origanal idea and i really like it. i think this will be the kind of story that once u start reading u cant stop. i hope u update soon. and if u ever have writers block tell us (us being ur fans) and we will bw sure to help.
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Reviewed By: BK On: June 28, 2005 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story. I think you have a good start to a great fanfic. I agree that there are still some questions to be answered, but there this story has only just begun. I am anxious to read the next chapter so hopefully you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: Josie n the Pcats [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 05:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting story. I will definitely be looking forward to the next chapter. I just have a couple of questions - will Inuyasha know that he is not marrying the real Kikyo? And how can Kagome marry as Kikyo if by law, Kikyo is already married? Please continue and update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: neng On: June 28, 2005 02:23 EDT
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alright. well i like the whole sisterly helping thing. and that kagome is willing to do that for her sister. but are we planning to make kikyou a real bitch? cause i would think that she would at least help her sister unless if kagome said that she wanted to make it on her own then yeah that's cool... i do like it though and i think that you should continue... i hope you do cause i'd like to actually finish a story where inuyasha and kagome are forced into a marriage. cause most authors just abandon it after 3 chapters or so. so i pray that you continue.
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