| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 23:57 EDT
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*sniff sniff* wahhhhh.. Poor Inuyasha. Poor Kagome. They are just too dense to realize they are perfect for each other. Too trapted in what ifs, and tangled lies. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope you get a chance to update sooner, but I understand either way. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 18:51 EDT
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Aww... sadness that you won't be with internet for a while. I remember when I didn't have it and I had to go to the library. It was ...just so sad. Anyway. Good chappie. I wish Inu and Kags would stop missing on the important things like their actual feelings. Inu thinking Kags don't like him and vice versa. Those two will never learn... or will they?
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Title: fantastico
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 17:55 EDT
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I'll be looking forward to when you return home ^^. Have fun at your friends house.
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 17:37 EDT
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*sings* When four becomes two...(pharaphrases Spice Girls). That...was.. Oh. I guess there's just no good way to handle reintroduction during those circumstances... perhaps kidnapping isn't a good way to break the ice anyway? Inuyasha also handeled that whole mate business really neatly. He said exactly what he ment in a totally clear and understandable way so there was no risk for misunderstandings. *breaks down* WHY?? WHY do they have to make EVERYTHING so DIFFICULT? I sewar, next up Inuyashas manager says that everyone thinks he would lose popularity in taking Kagome back or whatever. But you said next chapter will be happy, ne? Wait... don't tell me you're throwing in a Sango/Miroku-stall on us??? GAH!
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Reviewed By: babyblueyes On: July 09, 2007 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzplzplzplzplz write again! i would love to read another chapter!!!! plzplzplzplzplzplz!!!!
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Title: @O@
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28(not logged in) On: July 08, 2007 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God i just love this story~! :D I cant WAIT to see what happens, keep it up~! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ra On: July 08, 2007 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep going!
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Reviewed By: babyblueyes On: July 08, 2007 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ppplllzzzz!!!! write another chapter!!!!!! i wanna know what happens next ppppllzzzz!!! =D pretty plz?
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 19:52 EDT
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Yes, I'm guilty of having written My Little Pony. I took all the fanfiction I'd written offline because after more than a year of not adding anything to any of them, I re-read them to see if they were worth resurrecting...and decided unequivocally, irrevocably...no.
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Title: nooooooooooo
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 07:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon!!!!!!! This story is addicting and really amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter. There were soo many times where I was yelling at the computer for them to just tell eachother. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:55 EDT
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great chapter update... so here comes the moment of truth... i hope... it's getting good... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 12:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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SNIFFLE...WHIMPER ...SOBBB!!!! MORE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 11:15 EDT
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Chapter Nineteen: *growls* Grrrr.... How could you stop there? *sob* It was so good! *sob* Wahhhhhhh...! Anyways, please, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 09:19 EDT
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Hey there! You let Kikyo's husband present himself as such twice, and it wasn't until the second time Inuyasha went ballistic. Was that intentional? Because it seems a little strange that he's so calm first time around. And I am happy Inuyasha FINALLY sees that there´s two of them! Let's hope he can bite back on his anger and feelings of betrayal and just accept that what was supposed to be an arrange marriage turned out to be one made in love. All good, ne? But you won't do that, will you?
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 04:53 EDT
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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhh!!! *jumps up and down with glee* you updated you updated!! yippie yippie!!!! Oh that was a bad place to stop, but finally finally Inuyasha gets a clue. Finally he figures/finds out that Kagome is Kagome and not Kikyou. Whooooo hooooo... And i loved the talk in the basement between Kikyous husband and Inuyasha.. I love the name down plays. Anyways, I hope you get inspired to whip out another chapter soon. I absolutely adore this story, and the suspense is killing me. Keep up the excellent work!
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