| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 05:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVED THIS STORY! Please update with another chapter as soon as you have the time! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: June 29, 2005 03:45 EDT
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I like it I like it., Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: squeeker On: June 28, 2005 16:20 EDT
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i like this story. its an origanal idea and i really like it. i think this will be the kind of story that once u start reading u cant stop. i hope u update soon. and if u ever have writers block tell us (us being ur fans) and we will bw sure to help.
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Reviewed By: BK On: June 28, 2005 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story. I think you have a good start to a great fanfic. I agree that there are still some questions to be answered, but there this story has only just begun. I am anxious to read the next chapter so hopefully you will update soon.
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Reviewed By: Josie n the Pcats [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 05:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting story. I will definitely be looking forward to the next chapter. I just have a couple of questions - will Inuyasha know that he is not marrying the real Kikyo? And how can Kagome marry as Kikyo if by law, Kikyo is already married? Please continue and update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: neng On: June 28, 2005 02:23 EDT
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alright. well i like the whole sisterly helping thing. and that kagome is willing to do that for her sister. but are we planning to make kikyou a real bitch? cause i would think that she would at least help her sister unless if kagome said that she wanted to make it on her own then yeah that's cool... i do like it though and i think that you should continue... i hope you do cause i'd like to actually finish a story where inuyasha and kagome are forced into a marriage. cause most authors just abandon it after 3 chapters or so. so i pray that you continue.
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