| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 17:39 EDT
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I'd never thought I'd like a story set in Hollywood, but you have indeed worked miracles with this. I understand why Inuyasha believes Kagome and Kikyo to be the same - after all, isn't he like that, too? But I do wonder why Kagome doesn't bother correcting Inuyasha when he calls her Kagome in Kikyo- form. Too chocked? Not noticing out of habit? and me, as probably many others, wonder who Kikyo's husband is and what he thinks about it all... however, the more Kagome/Inuyasha-stuff, the happier me! Take your time, enjoy, and ganbatte ne!
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 08:00 EDT
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I don't really get Inuyasha's plan, although that MAY have to do with the fact that the female brain is insanely superior to the males'. However, I still LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing style and the idea of the story of Inuyasha loving Kagome and Kikyou... as the same person (I admit I've been toying with the idea but couldn't find an angle I liked about it, not to mention the biggest writer's block). I hope you update soon even if you're out of the country, wherever that is. Even if it DOES take a couple of months, I still want to continue this story no matter what. InuKag forever cuz they're the perfect couple! But MirSan isn't THAT imperfect, either! Will there be any MirSan action soon? And will Sango ever realize that Miroku is Inuyasha the actor's agent (well, at least I assume Miroku is his agent) and Inuyasha the hanyou's friend??? And once again, intellect proves to be inferior to a woman's intuition!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: March 24, 2007 05:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
After all this time. You have finally updated! I'm so .... HAPPY!! Please update soon
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Reviewed By: j jarviss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 17:21 EDT
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yay! i read this story last year and you stopped updating so i freaked out and now i'm going insane because you updated again! this story rocks hard. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 11:33 EDT
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Wow, good job. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story - please have the rest out soon!
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: Cougiecat1 On: January 23, 2007 22:40 EST
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You shouldn't put your writing or this story down. It has a nice refreshing plot with plenty of angst and a lot of personality. I'm sorry to hear that you lost your original outline, and I hope you can figure it out again. I have checked mediaminer regularaly specifically for this story for months because it IS original and fun. It is one of the better AU pieces out there. You have taken a basic fiscally poor Kagome is paired up with super hot rich InuYasha plot, but you have removed the class differences (because Kagome is related to someone in that class so money and fame and fortune become liabilities instead of bonuses). Because of this you spend more time focusing on the emotions and confusion of the characters involved than in reinforcement of the fantasy setting. You have done a very good job keeping the characters separated not just by saying Kamoge-disguised-as-Kikyo but by using the tone and emotions of the other characters involved. It also helps that you havn't done any real Kikyo bashing :)
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 10:55 EST
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This story is really good. I'm sooooooo glad your updating it again!
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Reviewed By: Lifes_untold_stories [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 04:45 EST
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this is a really good story please keep going... hopefully the plot will be good, more then likely it will be though, cause you really aare a good author. Well update soon please.
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 00:25 EST
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Lovely chapter! I just can't wait till he finds out the truth...I so wonder what that will be like! Well update soon! =)
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Reviewed By: stormie_pe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 00:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
so i just reread your story and just wanted to say i like it. i don't know if you're even still working on this one, but it's fun and it'd be nice to know how it's going to end. that's all i had to say. happy holidays and all.
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 19:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...just read the chapter! It was really good, too bad you have a not-so-fanfic-friendly roommate or we could have gotten the whole thing out at one time! T_T Oh, well...I'm just glad we got something! It was really good...I feel really bad for everyone involved in the situation...I really wish the Kagome would just go against her sister's wishes and reveal who she is to Inuyasha! Anyways, just want to tell you that you aren't being too repetitive like you said you were. I think everything is fine. Your words flow smoothly and everything is perfect! :D Great job! Can't wait to see what happens next so please just update whenever you can! Until then, take care! :D
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 00:37 EST
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ooo Aww poor Inu and Kag...I can't wait till he finds out the truth, wonder how that's going to be like? Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 16:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...excellent chapter! :D (I'm so glad you updated!) I feel real sorry for Inuyasha, though...all this drama over something he doesn't know the full story about. :( Anyways, wonderful! Update again when you get the chance, please? Until then, take care! :D
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot! i hope that you update real soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 20:35 EST
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You have some very great stories!! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!!
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