| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Title: I love this
Reviewed By: Cherryblossombabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 19:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I can't wait to see next what happen's between Inu and Kag. Update soon 'cause this story really captures my interest.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2006 16:49 EST
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this is really good, quite large indents in posting i saw but still good. update as soon as u can.
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: September 03, 2005 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inuyasha kinda smart and everyone calls him dumb.Still even if his plan works he still won't really know the true will he. Oh well. Keep writing Please
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Reviewed By: dave55man On: August 15, 2005 23:00 EDT
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Yeah, I likt this story already, that is with Kagome playing two sides of a love triangle with Inuyasha. Keep updating:)
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! It's awesome! That cereal war was pretty funny. I like where this story is going. And I haven't seen any other fics with this plotline, so I don't think it's cliched. Hehehe! This is going to be one goooood story! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: bbbeee On: August 14, 2005 11:40 EDT
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that was a hilirious chapter about the two sugar freaks. well, good job!!! I m sure that you wont mess up your plot. see ya, bbb
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 08:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i do hope that you update soon. Your story is great i cant wait to see what the next chapter will be like. :)
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Reviewed By: Tianna On: August 14, 2005 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I really enjoy reading that, I thought the cereal part was oh so very funny. Can't wait to see what hapens next but of course I will. So good work and keepe it up!
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Reviewed By: Night_Miko (not logged in) On: August 04, 2005 21:31 EDT
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Nice written chapter you have here. I canot wait til the next chapter, keep writing and I'll keep reading and reviewing.
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Reviewed By: dragongigi On: July 29, 2005 19:08 EDT
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You want to leave Inuyasha in the dark but give hints/clues to Kagome's identity. Working with Kagome's atraction to Inuyasha and add in the pressure of her staying in role as Kikyou. Throw in a family reunion in which Kikyou and Kagome have to be in the same room. In addition you can make the girl who greets Kagome in the first chapter a psychopath and she stalks Kagome and wants her back in the small theathers and she tracks Kagome down playing the role of Inuyasha's wife and reveals it to the media. Or you can have her threaten Inuyasha about the publicity stunt he is doing.
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is getting more interesting. You definitely have me hooked. As for the marriage and what name Kagome uses, I think what you said about her saying "Kikyo" is her stage name is a great idea. That way, Kagome is getting married and Kikyo's real marriage is safe. Awesome job on this chapter and please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: fluffyearedinulvr2 On: July 29, 2005 11:45 EDT
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SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD SO GOOD!! i really like this story, and kagome's impressions of kikyo were fabulous! I can't wait to see what happens when inu finds out! PLEASE update soon, sooner than the last time.
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Reviewed By: neng On: July 29, 2005 10:02 EDT
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aha... i did understand it. alright within that chapter i got a little bit of the kikyou that i think you are trying to portray... i think... somwat... ahh buh humbug. well i await the next installment.
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Reviewed By: A&W On: July 05, 2005 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story so far. Please continue. It's really good. I was just wondering if people who were close to Kagome and Kikyo would know about the plan 'cause don't you think that if their parents saw Kagome impersinating her sister on tv, they would be like, hey, that's not Kikyo. But whatever. The story's great. two thumbs up:)
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Reviewed By: *inuluvher151*(notsignedin) On: July 04, 2005 03:40 EDT
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hey this is really great so far. hope you continue. can't wait until you update hope it's soon
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