| "A Marriage of Convenience for Whom?" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: amumregisteredatthemomentmember On: April 29, 2007 07:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
something to wait with anxiety!! more!!!!! you just can't leave it hanging!
|
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am for shamed. I haven't reviewed at all till now and I should have. You have made a very interesting premise that is fantastical to begin with and have made a MOST enjoyable story of it. You have taken the washed-out AU of 'movie-star' and made it not only intriguing, you've made it very readable and fun as well. I understand real-life commitments, however I hope to see more of this most original take in a properly written and formatted take. I thank you for this, most sincerely and want you to try hard on it. I like it very much. :D
|
Title: thanx
Reviewed By: jullun On: April 28, 2007 05:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanx for the new chapter. i really liked it. hope u have more time to write more.so go on. and don't take jeez as a bad sign from me.jeez means YAY in norwegian. Ja ne!
|
Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
durn, im so gonna miss this story if you take a break, its a totally amazing tale youve woven, and i cant wait for each chapter you add! i thought this chapter was very good...it was well written, and totally beautiful, just like always. i love inuyashas promise to kagome...and YAY sango knows now!!! thats so crazy!!! i have some weird feeling that kagomes gonna find out before sango tells her and shes gonna be mad at him for not telling her...i cant wait.
|
Title: awww
Reviewed By: Cherryblossombabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder what agome is gong to think when she finds out about inu, i ope she's not mad they're starting to get along so well, their wedding was sooo romantic even if it was supposidely just for show cuteness update soon thank you Sincerely Cherryblossombabe
|
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 19:58 EDT
Comment/Review:
Latest Chapter: Brilliant update, as per usual. I love how your updating more often now. Keep up the good work - and update soon! This new twist in the plot is wonderful.
|
Reviewed By: Im it today On: April 27, 2007 18:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
In chapter 14, you mention that Inuyasha's eyes are gold while he is in human form in the limo. As a human, his eyes are actually purple or brown, depending on if you follow the manga or the anime. Also, their marriage is not legal since Kagome did not use her real name. In fact, she committed fraud. Are you going to address that issue? I have been really surprised that Kagome (supposedly a college graduate here) has not been worrying about the fraud at all. You actually write that she is thinking of herself as really married, when I'm sure she would realize that she is not legally married to Inuyasha at all.
|
Reviewed By: KaIvAaL On: April 26, 2007 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi there!!! i was hoping for this a long time! OMG it's soo fucking good. I really like your way of writting and telling the story!! it's fabulous...sorry i didn't review last time but to many school works got me stressed jajajaja Why the fuck is inuyasha always angry, he's always hot headed. I love the part Sango got to see how sexy is Miroku...but everything was thrown away by Kikyous calls, that's not nice.There's one more thing i want to see: when Inuyasha discovers Kagome and Kikyou are sisters and that they are different persons, what is he goin' to do? i i beg and hope you update soon cause' i wanna Know what's going to happen!! I'll review every time i can.luck with your exams, Thanks! your fan val Pd: don't hate me if i don't write well english, i'm from Colombia jejeje.
|
Reviewed By: Myr-Myr On: April 23, 2007 17:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for the update! I'm supposed to be doing my homework but I couldn't resist commenting! It's so sad they should just tell each other every thing and get it over with. I guess that wouldn't make a very good story though. This is why your the authoress and I'm just a lowly reviewer.
|
Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 18:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
Chapter 14: That was inspired. I mean, the name thing was brilliant. If I could, I would give you cookies. Of course, I can't, but... *sigh*
|
Title: =9
Reviewed By: jullun On: April 22, 2007 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jezz that was a good one. i like this story. i hope u will come up with more chapters soon. PLZ do it for your readers who wants to know how their life will be and if they ever will tell their secrets^_^
|
Title: Too lazy to sign in
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer too lazy to sign in On: April 21, 2007 23:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
*grins* i liked the slip ups with Inuyasha and Kagome. I can't wait to read what the honeymoon is like. You're lucky i like this story so much, im reviewing it on my vacation. How devoted is that? *grins* keep up the good work and i eagerly await the next chapter.
|
Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 18:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Before I praise you, a question. During the ceremony, Kagome is looking into golden eyes it says, but Inuyasha's supposed to be in human form. Is this a mistake or is Kagome thinking about "her" Inuyasha, the hanyou? The text doesn't suggest so, but then again, I'm lacking sleep (as always) and may not have understood fully. Otherwise I really loved how you used the wedding song, making the last "Dun dun du duun" have the effect of bassons of doom due to the situation. That was sneaky comic! I also loved how you let Inuyasha transform to kiss his wife - and then left us hanging completely in the dark. I don't have the slightest idea how you'll go from here, it's totally unpredictable. Will Kouga show up again? How will Kagome tell Kikyo what she needs to know to keep up the facade (conversations and such Kagome participates in but that Kikyo might need to know in case she meets Inuyasha someplace or work with him). Will there be Sango-Miroku-action? And it's hinted Kagome is a virgin which Kikyo is not. Gah, don't let Inuyasha discover the scam that way, GODS! Sorry to be a blabbermouth, but I get like that when I'm enthusiastic. I'm happy you managed well with your speech, and by all means, take your time with your updates. As you can see, your fans are faithfuil and we will wait for the treats. So take time, and take care! : )
|
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story and cant wait to see what happens next, keep up the excelent updates! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: @___@ On: April 20, 2007 05:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good story. Keep up the good work ^^
|
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
